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Reviews for Parvus Obitus

By : darnedchild
  • From ANON - USTMistress on December 18, 2003
    All I can think is "WOW!" Thank God I don't have my heat turned up or I'd be a melted puddle in my chair right now. Please, keep going!
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  • From ANON - kate on December 18, 2003
    I was afraid this had been abandoned, but your A/N reassured me. Based on the success of both chapters, please consider yourself (and Jason) thanked most heartily.

    I'm looking forward to what I hope is the inevitable meeting of the -- er -- minds. I'm enjoying the inner turmoil and monologues nearly as much as your extremely talented smut; it's not easy to do an equally gjob job describing the sex AND the emotions.

    Looking forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - Rilla on December 18, 2003
    Writing smut *is* hard, but you definitely have a gift. My gosh, both these chapters were hot and they haven't even had sex. Definitely looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Patatita on December 18, 2003
    More please? I can't wait for more!! Very nice work!
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  • From ANON - ZeeDrippyVessel on December 07, 2003
    I beg to differ with you madam, on several points...

    1. That was MOST excellent

    2. That damn well better NOT be one shot! This demands and deserves more!

    Now, get off your patootie and write it!

    Zee
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  • From ANON - Pauline on December 05, 2003
    Wow - that one sneaks up on you. Very cleverly executed and beautifully written. Have you written otworkworks? This does beg a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Candygirl on December 04, 2003

    Very very hot! I confess I was disappointed that SS did not obtain, shall we sa"rel"release," but perhaps that is for another story? It was certainly true to the situation. More, please. Please?
    Candygirl
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  • From ANON - zelda regina on December 03, 2003
    More, please! Cant believe this is your first story, you are sooo gifted!
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  • From ANON - ariel on December 03, 2003
    please continue writing, you write well and keep your characters in character. more please!
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  • From ANON - snape\'s dark eyed girl on December 03, 2003
    Great story! Are you sure you don't want to continue? :)
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  • From ANON - Gina R Snape on December 03, 2003
    This was an interesting idea. Snape's sexy, silky voice is frequently a focus of arousal. But this is the first time I've read it being used as the sexual tool.

    Wish I'd thought of it first! :-P

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  • From ANON - white raven on December 02, 2003
    What a unique idea, and an enjoyable read. This was rec'd on a yahoo group so I followed the link here. Well written and kept my eyes glued to the screen. It would be lovely to see this developed into more than just a one-shot.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2003
    pray, continue

    I am recommendihis his on my group
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  • From ANON - Anna Marie on November 22, 2003
    Bravo! I loved this. Sleek and erotic. Please, please a sequel? I'd love to "see" the two get completely together. Wonderful job.
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on November 22, 2003
    Oh yes - that speech in person with that voice - yes it would be effective. More, please.
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