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Reviews for Parvus Obitus

By : darnedchild
  • From ANON - bansidh on November 22, 2003
    Ooh yummy. Good job for your first PWP. Actually, plain old good job. More please! *fans self*
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on November 22, 2003
    Great googly moogly woman,
    what are you trying to do, kill me!!
    One shot smut, I don't think so!!
    I am willing to beg, plead, seel a couple of organs,
    Whatever it takes to make you carry on with this story!!
    Fantastic!!
    Kisses
    GrrArrg
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  • From KittyGreenwitch on November 22, 2003
    Holy crap that was positively orgasmic! Just the one thing: Snape saying 'baby' just...isn't...right... But other than that it's a kick-ass chapter. I'd like a bottle of that potion when he's finished. You rock girl!
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  • From ANON - Jessi on November 22, 2003
    Oi, goodness woman, if you can write that well about Hermione getting herself off, when Snape gets her off (hint hint) it's gonna send us girls through the roof. None of this one shot nonsense, you must write more! :D
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on November 22, 2003
    Oh, this is good...this is real good. Are you planning more or a one time thing? I love it.

    Red

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  • From ANON - raven on November 22, 2003
    Absolutely brillant. I would love to hear your take on their subsequent "conversation." Not to mention, who gets the potion? The choices...
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  • From ANON - liquidscissors on November 22, 2003
    Good lord. This was just fantastic.

    I sincerely hope that there is going to be more!
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  • From ANON - Andrian on November 22, 2003
    Wow, this was really excellent. You have never wrote like this before? Well you definitely should do it more often. Bloody brilliant.
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  • From ANON - kate on November 22, 2003
    NOT THAT GREAT??

    Please tell me that was a facetious comment. Good night, author, that was perfect! Hot, unusual but not squicky, and ended beautifully!

    Hoping we'll be able to read how that talk between them goes... NOT A HINT, I'M BEGGING!!
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  • From ANON - Kim on November 22, 2003
    This story deserves to be continued, if only for Hermione to truly lose her virginity. I enjoyed how you gave us Snape's thoughts and then his spoken words. I hope the other people in the room here didn't notice my quickened breathing as I read the climax. Thanks for the story.

    Kim

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  • From ANON - Talisman on November 21, 2003
    _Very_ well done. Oh, ho ho ho my. I don't smoke but now I want a cigarette for some reason.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 21, 2003
    This was FABULOUS!!! Please don't leave it as a one shot, make it a double, a tripple even!!! As far as I'm concerned you can take this all the way to actual touching, making love, their wedding, honeymoon & beyond!!! MORE PLEEEEEEEEEASE!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - MaddyRiddle on November 21, 2003
    WOW! That was great!
    That first year speech is definitely a part of our fantasies with Severus. *grin sheepishly*

    You can't leave things like this! Please, please, please continue! After that "phone sex" they need to continue, please!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lura on November 21, 2003
    One-shot? One-Shot??! gah, you can't leave it hanging there, heheh... ohhh you have to continue. pretty please?
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on November 21, 2003
    "It had been very stimulating to hear her but not see or touch
    her. He knew it would be ten times better when he finally did give free reign to
    his hands. When he saw her face when she came for him.

    *Whoa, boy. That is not going to happen.* "

    Oh, make it happen! You MUST write more - they've got to get together in person... or by owl post sex... SOMETHING! This was a WONDERFUL fic, especially for your first one. I'm flushing, and that's tough to do nowadays ;). Pleeez write more!

    WendyNat

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