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Reviews for Parvus Obitus

By : darnedchild
  • From Semidazed on November 21, 2003
    Damn! That was an AMAZING story! Please tell me it isn't a one-shot! You HAVE to continue writing. This is excepal wal work, especially for not having seen you on aff.net before! You've got a gift... let's hope you use it for good instead of EVIL!

    Still Ill,
    TheGreyLady
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  • From ANON - Patatita on November 21, 2003
    Please, can you write some more? Its wonderfull. I love it!! PLEASE pretty Please????
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  • From ANON - goddessblkrose on November 21, 2003
    Lovely, lovely, lovely and even better because it is NOT PWP. PWP, though fun, is not terribly engaging or have the same resonance as stories which have beautifully drawn characters and growth and change in those characters and their relationships. Of course, you do realize, since your story had all that, you are now obligated to write the sequel, right? Please?
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  • From ANON - Rilla on November 21, 2003
    Wow! Are you planning on adding more? That was fabulous! Excellent for a first time PWP!!!
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  • From ANON - Peeves on November 21, 2003
    This is NOT a one-shot!! It CAN'T be!! lol I love this story and it's a VERY good first attempt...better than good! I would like it oh so much better if you CONTINUED lol.lol. This line, btw, "Snape smirked; somehow he
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  • From ANON - Karena Elizabeth on November 21, 2003
    Oh. My. Goodness. As if my fear with PWP, I'm afraid you aren't going to post anything else in this GREAT little story. I *know* you said it was a PWP, but for the love of all that is smutty, I want more! *pants and thinks about phone sex* Yeah - post more? *whew*

    That was freakin' hot - great job!

    Karena ELizabeth
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