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Reviews for Hermione pulls it off

By : Shiv5468
  • From ANON - moony_reader on March 26, 2004
    AHHHH! You're still writing this, right? Please say you are! I totally love this. I have read a couple of the "Gryffindor Stud" Challenges in which Hermione does all of the things she refuses to do in this story and I must say that I appreciate your version a lot more. It seems much more 'Hermione.' Especially since Hermione would definitely be more concerned with a long-term relationship with Snape, as opposed to winning a silly contest. Please keep writing. Umm... however in the last chapter when Snape is touching her breasts maybe you could be a little more descriptive? You know, like describe what she's feeling, what the sensations are like, exactly what he's doing... even a physical description. I know that you meant that scene to me more tender than necessarily full-blown sexuality. However, with a little more it could be both. I think that you are a very talented writer and I can't wait to read more. I love your wit. :D
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  • From ANON - Iona on March 17, 2004
    Very enjoyable! I find the idea of Snape and Hermione together intriguing som somewhat unexpected, and this is among the best Potterverse fics I've read. Extremely witty and vastly amusing! I'm glad you didn't throw them in the sack almost right away as some other writers have done - it wouldn't have been quite believable for these two characters. Morrrrrre please, prrretty please with a rrrolling Finnish rrrr!
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  • From ANON - LittleBird on February 28, 2004
    Wonderful second date. Loved the wifely skills comment. Nice that they are taking it slow (even if it's faster than they thought they would.)
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  • From ANON - clare_aden on February 26, 2004
    Snape's character is fascinating and Hermione gives the impression of hiding us a couple of things.
    I'm so happy you didn't abandon that story!
    Please keep going.
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  • From ANON - Seva on February 25, 2004
    why did they have to stop? why?
    lol, brilliant and witty as ever, *bows down*

    ***Seva***
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  • From ANON - hephastus on February 24, 2004
    I AM GOING TO SCREAMMMM!!!!!!! Of all the SS/HG's you've written, the cottage by the ocean is so overwhelmingly suggestive and so clear in my mind that I cannot BELIEVE you stopped them both like that!!! You cruel, heartless author! WHY WHY WHY did you stop??! If you don't keep writing this one, oh my god, I'o ito it myself! Don't make me come over there and write for Hermione Granger! Good GOD, continue this one or I will die of frustration! A cottage! The ocean! The moon....argh! Keep writing!!!
    Yours in great admiration, Hephastus
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  • From ANON - LoveThePotionBoy on February 24, 2004
    Thank Gods for tea, eh? Delicious as always, Shiv. Nice one. Kait x
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  • From ANON - FilleBleue on February 23, 2004
    I'm really enjoying this fic so far, hope you update vewy soon... Like the way you've portrayed Sev and Herm, also like the way the plot is developing...
    More soon?
    Pwease?
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 22, 2004
    Chapter 5... It s ths that things are moving along quite nicely for these 2!!! I do hope that Severus will take that holiday!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 22, 2004
    awe...why'd they have to stop? 5 date rule or something? thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - Renate on February 22, 2004
    The best chapter yet, and this is my favourite of all the stories you've got going! Can't wait to read more! :)
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  • From ANON - FriendlyQuark on February 22, 2004
    My mouth was going a bit dry there as well. I think I need a good strong cuppa, myself. He fell asleep, that was really sweet and a greater compliment than he might ever know.
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  • From ANON - Jenny on February 22, 2004
    *giggles*

    I'd practically forgotten this story. It's brilliant! And this last chapter was superb.

    There are echoes of the relationship in ... oh ... Celebration (I have trouble remembering titles) - the mutual caring, in the literal physical sense of the word caring. Pretty.

    I like your characterisation of Hermione's mum particularly. This strikes me as the most likely characterisation - rather like my mother, actually, which is highly plausible when you consider the similarities of the eleven-year-old girls they brought up ... where was this sentance going? Oh yes. She's highly plausible and extremely likely, and I hope we actually meet her at some point.

    The by-play about murdering Hermione's father appeals to my sense of humour a *lot*. *snigger*

    One teeny tiny point - an error in a couple of the early chapters which is highly uncharacteristic of you. You refer to the "teacher's" doing x,y,z ... I know you're purveying lemons, but is a greengrocer's apostrophe strictly necessary? ;) (Sorry. Bad joke. Bad Jenny.)

    Anyway, lovely story, lovely chapters.

    Lovely Shiv, doing all this updating. :)
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on February 22, 2004
    Excellent chapter Shiv. I love how you extol the virtues of coffee and tea. What other ragerages are next? Water, perhaps. Champagne, soda?
    Fun fic. One of my personal favLoveLove the humor.
    Cheers dear!
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  • From ANON - Christina on February 16, 2004
    I love this story! I hope that you decide to keep updating. *_*
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