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Reviews for Snape\'s Choice

By : Witchcraft
  • From ANON - Talene on December 10, 2003
    Why such short chappies? I like your story and am looking forward to more. Update soon?

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  • From ANON - Estrilda on December 10, 2003
    Just popped in for a minute - I haven't read the whole story, but wanted to leave two little hints. First "THREW" means to toss something. The word you are looking for most of the time you have used THREW is actually THROUGH. Perhaps you could do a "find" and "replace" with the edit function of Word or Wordperfect and then copy it back into the site. The other thing is really minor, but is my pet peeve that I always write about. In Hr's letter to Harry in Chapter 9, Hermione would have written "Severus and I," not "me and Severus." Many, many writers do this. It helps to make compound subjects correct if you try the pronoun with the verb that follows it without using the "and." This trick works for most folks. Also, Hermione might have written about "the Ministry's basic requirements for conjugal relations and breeding for "statutorily-mandated" couples" or whatever you are calling them in the story. This would avoid the rather ackward clause about what couples "do." Anyway, you are doing much better with each story. {SMILE}
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on December 10, 2003
    This is getting crazy, I hope you get back to the romance soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - SandraM on December 10, 2003
    Somebody better feed that redheaded weasel to Fluffy... BEFORE I get to him. Good chaps.
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  • From slygriff21 on December 10, 2003
    WHAT! Snape can't lose Hermione! Please update again soon!

    Tiff
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 10, 2003
    Sounds like it's time for Hermione to completely seperate herself from Ron!!! The thought of her with Percy... can we say YUCK!!! Can't wait to read about the actual meeting with Fudge!!eb >eb >^..^
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  • From ANON - fff on January 23, 0000
    u are a good wrighter.........and i love p.o.vs this is great please4 cuntinue...PLEASE>>>
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  • From slygriff21 on December 09, 2003
    Awsome story! Please update again soon.

    p.s. If you get the chance please check out my story A Marriage By Law and please review to let me knw what you think.

    Thanks
    slytheringriffendor21
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on December 09, 2003
    Man, I dislike Ron. The smut, well for not being your thing, you did fine. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 09, 2003
    Just finished chapters 8 & 9..... Ronn asn ass & Fudge is an even bigger one!!! I am so glad to see Severus finally be able to be with Hermione!!!

    I really do like the ideas in your story & have found that you have some pretty good & original thoughts for your work!!! I am also impressed with how much your writing has improved!!! If I enjoy the basics of a story I have a habit of overlooking the mistakes for the most part. As I said, your work haprovproved & it does make your story even more enjoyable to read!!! *
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on December 08, 2003
    Please tell me someone asassinates(sp) Fudge, errrg. I guess this will speed things up a bit. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - szara on December 08, 2003
    This fanfic is great,but the last chapter was too short.
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  • From ANON - Talene on December 08, 2003
    Still following your story and loving it! Update soon?
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 07, 2003
    Looks like Hermione is starting to make it a point to work herself into her marriage, a little at a time. I like the fact that you haven't made Severus into a bastard that would push her into this, but that he realizes that she will need time. I like the fact that he wants to protect her & I think that will help her in getting closer to him. Til next update, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Joyful on December 06, 2003
    Oh, please post more! I love where this is going!


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