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Reviews for Snape\'s Choice

By : Witchcraft
  • From ArachneNonafel on December 05, 2003
    Poor Sev....he's gonna fsooosooo rejected. I understand how Herms feels though. Update soon?
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on December 05, 2003
    I really admire your tenacity in producing these stories. They have been improving steadily and this one is definitely the best by far. The spelling and grammar have improved enough to let your creativity shine through. Don't forget spell check, though. Good luck.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on December 05, 2003
    thanks for the update.
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  • From Shiv5468 on December 05, 2003
    I must say that your work has improved with this piece. You are paying more attention to your spelling and grammar and are paying more attention to the development of character rather than just concentrating on the plot.




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  • From ANON - Carmella on December 01, 2003
    Sweet lordy, this is one of the better stoies with the marrage law idea, keep it up plese I want to see were this is going!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on November 29, 2003
    Geesh, Ron is pretty ugly, good thing od sod slapped. This story is pretty fast paced and I'm enjoying it. This has been an interesting challenge to follow. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 29, 2003
    Sounds like Ron is being a total (_!_)!!! I love it that both girls gave him a bit of needed info in the form that they did ;-) Til your next update!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 29, 2003
    Lovong your story and craving updates. Please soon?
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 28, 2003
    I have been reading since the first and i am very much looking forward to reading more of your work. Please update soon?
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 28, 2003
    I think it's a good thing that you are allowing Hermione to work into getting to know Severus slowly, she can't just jump into it. Til Chapter 5, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Kat Denton on November 28, 2003
    Cute idea, good start to answering the challenge. You've got a few word choices that may have been the fault of your spellchecker that you might want to fix "THROUGH the Great Hall" in chapt 3 and again somewhere in chapt 4 (THROUGH meaning 'traversing distance' vs THREW ' physical force') And I think you want SS to be a CHEF, not a CHIEF (though he could do either)

    Looking forward to more

    Kat


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  • From ANON - spaz141 on November 26, 2003
    Yay, Malfoy gets beat up. I hope Ron isn't going to be too much of a prat. Enjg thg this take on the challenge.
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  • From ANON - Maven on November 26, 2003
    LOL! I love the last scene. Laughed my a$$ off. I like this story. I think it started off pretty well.

    I think Hermione is a bit OOC. I don't picture her as the type to come to an important decision like this so quickly, even with Malfoy hanging around. But I think the OOC-ness has a lot to do with the WIKTT challenge...

    Keep going.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 25, 2003
    I'm sure that they didn't want everyone to find out thru Ron's big mouth;-) Look forward to seeing how Malfoy responds, not to mention how people will now treat Hermione. Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - christie on November 25, 2003
    Wow! Great start of the story. What will Ron and Harry do now that Hermione is married to Snape? Will they continue to talk to her? If and when Malfoy attacks her, will they support her? Please update this one soon!
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