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Reviews for Snape\'s Choice

By : Witchcraft
  • From ANON - spaz141 on November 24, 2003
    Interesting take on the challenge.
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  • From ANON - Peeves on November 24, 2003
    Potter ~

    I have read all of your stories and I commend you for two things. Originality of thought and a tenacious mentality in regard to slogging on despite all opposition. I very much respect that. In comparing your stories when you first began posting, to the ones that you are posting now, there is a very great and noticable difference, you are improving in your writing. You still have much improving to do in certain areas, but I honestly believe that the fact that you continue and keep on trying says a lot for your character.

    ((raspberry))

    Peeves
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on November 24, 2003
    good start to another great story.
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on November 24, 2003
    I know that I have given you this same advice in prior stories, but I saw that folks are dropping your star rating and not really telling you why. I don't think that is terribly fair, so I felt compelled to try again. Please, please run your story through spell check before posting it. You can find an excellent set of grammar rules in an article written by Peeves a few weeks ago. She also gives directions in how to spell check if you don't have a word processing program. The most consistent error in your first chapter (besides spelling) is the use of "to" instead of "too." Please read through your story and put in "too" when you mean "also" or "very." Good luck.
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  • From ANON - Stratyllis on November 24, 2003
    That is such a cute start. I like the way you have Severus wanting Hermione in this one. In almost all the other ones it has Severus' Father forcing him. I can't wait to see how Draco reacts to losing Hermione to Severus. And how Hermione deals with being married to Severus.
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  • From ANON - Heather on November 24, 2003
    I really like the Marriage Contract stories. I haven't read one yet where Snape was already in love...cute concept! I like that fluffy feeling!

    I have noticed that the quality of your writing has increased as you publish more of your creative stories! Kudos.

    I will be waiting for more :)
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 24, 2003
    I like your take on this & look forward to seeing where you go with it!!! No doubt that Draco & his father will be pissed!!!
    Deb >^..^
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  • From smoken71 on November 24, 2003
    hey i like the way your going with this!! keep it up! amy
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