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Reviews for Revenant

By : jennengle
  • From ANON - crly on April 05, 2004
    when i read your story, chills run down my spine, and afterwards i'm always a bit cold, but i think there must be sacrifices made... :) love your story, update soon!
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  • From ANON - booklvr on March 15, 2004
    I am thoroughly entranced by this story. Please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - booklvr on March 15, 2004
    I am thoroughly entranced by this story. Please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Mei Of Maze on March 15, 2004
    I realise this isn't useful critizism, but I must say: wonderful! Jolly good!

    T.T I am tly tly enjoying this work of art, learning process or no~!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 15, 2004
    Chapter 6... I think this chapter stands on its own with out a doubt!!! Granted, it did have to do with the previous chapter, BUT it also had its own topic so I think that you seperated the 2 in a perfect place!!!

    I am looking forward to seeing if Harry will be able to help get Narcissa!!! I am also curious to see how Hermione & Draco work together?!? Should be less volatile than 1 might think since they have a mutual cause!!!

    I don't recall if I've mentioned it before, but I wanted to say that I am very touched by the INCREDIBLE way that you describe Severus!!! I can picture him in my mind & to think of him in this state is heart wrenching!!!

    As always I will be looking forward to your next update, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Ran on March 14, 2004
    What a great take on this theme! I love your angsty and tragic heroes. I can't wait for more :)
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  • From ANON - otherside on March 02, 2004
    wow, i love this story. its extremley well written and i am eager to see how you save poor snape from his fate. the first chapter was very dark- i loved it. and the boy who lived to drink snape's tea was great. i hope snapes tea making abilities appear again, just because
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  • From ANON - KDarkMaiden on March 02, 2004
    I love this story so far. its better than wonderful! I hope you update soon! REALLLLLLLLYYYYYYYY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!
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  • From ANON - Kate McGuire on March 02, 2004
    Wow. I love the details of the story. The book titles, M. McTabby, powershopping Ginny, Draco and Uncle Sev, everything. Especially though I like your description of the effects of the evil book.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 01, 2004
    Eeeeek! I just found this story...and..Eeeeek! This eeeek! means good things...though it does mean I am freaked out quite a lot.
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  • From ANON - ran on March 01, 2004
    Very good! I am looking forward to where you take it. ::sits down to wait for updates ... patiently... NOT!::
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  • From ANON - Seshat on February 12, 2004
    Great story so far. I absolutally loved the inclusion of the SoHo bookshop from "Gomensmens"
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  • From ANON - WizardingAngel on February 11, 2004
    wow that is a great start to a story well written and very descriptive....................I can't wait to see more and as always keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Sare Liz on February 11, 2004
    Oh Yay! You've updated! Oh the joy! Oh the rapture! Key-toh, key-toh, everything in the world is key-toh! ::dances around the room much as Smeagol danced when he finally got rid of Gollum::

    And Pratchett references! ::grins foolishly:: Crowley would so appreciatnnynny's five-fingered discount. I wonder if that's why he smiled. Anyway. Not the point.

    The point: I love this story. It's horribly haunting, totally angsty, and while that hasn't been my thing in a while, it's like watching a train wreck. It's absolutely riveting and you couldn't possibly move from your position, even though you know that once all is said and done you'll do what you need to do ( be it rescue people, or provide feedback for the author).

    Also a point of note: your characterizations are wonderful. Hermione is, of course, dead on, but it's the way you craft the marked lack-of-Severity, particularly after the first chapter, that has the chills crawling up and down my spine.

    So... Please. Go over those notes, become one with your beta, and write these beautiful things that you write. Please.

    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Tang on February 11, 2004
    Wow (how original is that), what a great kickoff to what is definitely going to be a memorable story!
    Negativenine I can hardly believe this is your first fic, it
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