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Reviews for New Beginning

By : Darkwriter
  • From ANON - nesscafe on December 03, 2003
    Poor Severus! He's trying so hard to be good and she's got never ending PMS! LOL! OH well! He'll get over it just like my hubby does! Hehe! Love the new chapters! This story sure is moving along! Can't wait to see what hap nex next!
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  • From ANON - Flick on December 03, 2003
    Yaaaaaay, another chapter. More plzzzz? Poooor Hermione, her emotions really are raging out of control aren't they. Hehe i can just see Hermione getting angry over Sev leaving with Darien and not telling her. Who wouldn't? Update soon please :)
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  • From ANON - helen on December 03, 2003
    am enjoying this story
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 03, 2003
    So very excellent and making me crave more! Plesae update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on December 03, 2003
    Oooo! Wonderful story, with added benefit of being completely original, a rare and precious thing in fandom. I can't wait to read more.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - kirien on December 02, 2003
    "Weasley is our King." Abso-fucking-lutely NOT. I was never a big fan of his. Does his family--Ginny and their parents--realize what a gigantic, pustulent, sick ASSHOLE he has become?!? WTF is wrong with that Stupid Weasel??? How Dare He raise a hand to Hermione *thinking very dark, malevolent Voldy-thoughts*
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on January 23, 1920
    Poor Hermione, granted having so many emotions to deal with, but more over, POOR EVERYONE ELSE!!!

    Draco gave Severus some interesting information about the search at Hogwarts... wonder what Albu will have to say about that?

    Polyjuice Potion... Good call!!! The only thing with that is that she doesn't trust Ron at all, won't that have some affect on the reversal. I realize that she will know that it is Severus, but if the reversal spell has some bad possibilities that go with it..... just curious how that fact will affect things? The good part will be that if it will work her hate & anger will be directed at the right person, ass for brains Ron Weasley!!!

    Can't wait to see what's next!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - kirien on December 02, 2003
    Deb,

    your story is BRILLIANT. The entire notion of Harry de-aging himself and turning into an infant again was really disturbing, something that rarely happens to me in my extensive rea of of HP fanfic. You threw me for a loop by being startling anfresfreshing. You've managed to be totally oril inl in the Hermione-returns-to-Hogwarts-with-childryliryline. It's plausible, and in Hermione's case, poignant and necessary. Ironic how the Boy Who Lived turns up stayintimatimate with his best female friend. Too bad it's not how HP/HG shippers usually envision it *evil smirk* . I can see why Harry would want to do it, since the pedestal the wizarding world's placed him on is a very lonely place, like living the bizarre bubble-life of Michael Jackson.

    Arrgh! AFF is sooo slow and prone to overloading. PLEASE consider posting this fine work (and any others HG/SS) over at Lord and Lady Snape.net. It's peachy--fast loading, friendly mods, and a gorgeous layout.
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  • From ANON - pinkyheather on December 02, 2003
    This is really good. And I have to say, i'm loving the fact that your chapters are so lonivesives us more to read :) Can't wait for more Ron bashing too. He's so not one of my favorite characters in the best of times. And Sev imitating him with Polyjuice? Poor Sev & Hermione. *G* Great work.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on December 02, 2003
    Another great chapter! Have I mentioned before that I love this story!?! I do! I really really do! Poor Severus is so worried! I hope everything works out for him. I always picture Snape as a man that needs someone to care about him. And I love that Darien is his and Hermione's child even though he used to be Harry! I hope they are able to keep baby Darien safe! Update soon! I like to review! ;c)
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  • From ANON - jenbachand on December 02, 2003
    :) What a great story. I love it. I love Dante too!!! :) Interesting twist on the baby's powers. Hope they kick sWeasWeasley ass. Think the twins would help if they knew what Ron had done? Hope he starts slow with Hermione. Flowers are always a good start, though for Hermione maybe a book on Mages too. :)

    Jen :)
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  • From ANON - Miss Night on December 02, 2003
    Very good story, I like it so much! I can't wait to see the next par it! it!
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  • From ANON - Temptation on December 02, 2003
    Just wanted to say hurry up & update. Q: Has anyone thought for Severus se ase a polyjuice of Ron to break the spell ? That way, Sev is spared the "problems" and it won't really matter if she hates Ron anymore than she already does? Just a twist. Can hardly wait to see next chapter(s)!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 02, 2003
    Always wonderful and surprising. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 01, 2003
    Why can't they find or create a spell that will allow Hermione to avoid the possible hate & divert it to her anger towards Ron? I really don't want her to end up hating him at all!!! I still want him to court her & be with her, but not to get her to stop hating him!!!
    I like the Dante charachter, charming & a rebel that has a brain!!! Hoping for more really soon*
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