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Reviews for New Beginning

By : Darkwriter
  • From ANON - slytherine_geek on December 01, 2003
    You really write fast. i wish i have a muse.... nice work by the way, make ron pay for what he did hahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - nesscafe on December 01, 2003
    WOW!!! I just started reading this and I'm totally blown away! I've never read a story like it and it's very well done! I was so disappointed that there was no more after chapter 13! LOL! You have to update again really soon! PL!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 01, 2003
    Hmm...I have a few ideas of how this could possibly go and I await futher updates to see if I am guessing correctly. Nice DADA teacher.... Your own character? Sees ya later....
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  • From ANON - Temptation on December 01, 2003
    Please keep this updated !! Please, please tell me Hermione hexs Ron's ----- off at least or makes them shrivel to shelled peanuts and unusable. Also have the Aurors boot his sorry butt, better yet turn Molly loose on him! (We all know how she loves kids & look what he did to poor Hermione). Also, will reversing the Adulterous Spell return her ability to have children or will Harry the mage be able to fix it or ....

    So many possibilities - keep up the writing!!!
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  • From ANON - Flick on December 01, 2003
    Wow. You update so quickly its great. Like 15 chapters in 4 days or something. Thats awesome. This fic creates great emotions for the reader and I really love this fic. Update soon please :)
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  • From ANON - strawberry gashes on December 01, 2003
    i love this fanfic! you do such a great job; it's so much better than most of the usual crap on this website. please keep writing, you've an audience now! :P
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 01, 2003
    In chapter 13 things are becoming even more iteresting!!! Well at least now Hermione knows all of the aspects of the spells Ron used on her.... I really feel bad for her!!! The thing about Harry, was that brought out because his magic combined with some from Hermione & Severus? Hoping for more soon & really appreciate that you update so quickly!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 01, 2003
    I didn't think I could hate Ron any more than I do in this story, BUT chapter 12 just proved me wrong!!! How in the hell could he do that to her?!?

    Also see that there is now a twist in the fact tha'm n'm not so sure that I want Sev to be the one to remove the spells...
    *It would take a very strong man to know that he helping her and not forcing her to have sex, and whoever did it, God help the man if he was in love with her, because she would probably hate him forever.*
    This can't be a good thing, but I can't think of anyone that she would trust, except maybe Albus... won't go there;-)

    You are really doing a GREAT job on this story, keeping us guessing & surprised!!! Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 30, 2003
    My poor Severus, I truly feel for your Hermione as well an hop hoping you have something truly horrendous in store for Ron.
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  • From ANON - star on November 30, 2003
    I"m addicted to your story!!!!! aaahhhh I need more please????????????? I hope you update again tonight!!!
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  • From ANON - Momma-d on January 23, 1920
    This is an incredible story and I have loved reading every chapter of it. Keep up the great work and I will be waiting to read the next wonderful chapter that you write.
    I love the plot, the characters, and especially how fast that you update.
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  • From ANON - lyssa on November 30, 2003
    faster pussycat ,write!write!
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  • From ANON - star on November 30, 2003
    oh gosh you have to update some more!!! I'm so loving this story!!!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 30, 2003
    Still reading and enjoying. No...nothing much more creative to sat other than taht casue it's hard to come up with a new comment every chapter yet...I want you to know that I am still reading and appreciate your literary talents. Well....what do you know? Something new....hehe
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 30, 2003
    I do LOVE all of the irony involved with the Obliviate spells!!! As for the 2, Ron went beyond being an ass to being a full fledged piece of $H1T, bastard, amongst other well deserved names!!! What the hell is his deal, was he worried that she would actually use her brain & leave his stupid ass?!?!? Can we say OBSESSIVE / POSSESSIVE!!! Really hating him here!!!

    I am hoping that it will be Severus that will be able to remove those 2 spells, hoping for soon, but no rush as long as it's him that gets to be the one;-)

    I do look forward to watching this story unfold, it has quickly become one of my favorites & am very thankful that you update as quickly as you do!!! Deb >^..^
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