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Reviews for New Beginning

By : Darkwriter
  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on November 28, 2003
    your story started off very dark....and I had prepared myself for an interesting angsty story....chapter 8 was so sweet....this is such a good story and I can't wait until you update again.
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  • From ANON - Talene on November 28, 2003
    Still reading and enjoying, Please update soon?
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  • From ANON - STAR on November 28, 2003
    I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY!!! WHAT AN ORIGINAL IDEA!!! PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON..
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  • From ANON - Tessa99999 on November 28, 2003
    I like this story alot! I mean really I do. I only review thed std stories so feel special or something. This story has a plot, a REAL plot, which most stories here lack. It also is grammatically correct. Maybe not completely, but I didn't notice anything that would distract to reader from the story. (Lots of stories here are bad about that too. Ewies to bad grammer and spell checking! I also like how you update so well. That's a rare trait(even for me). I'm glad you do. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more good writing from you.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 28, 2003
    Just read chaptes 6 & 7... WOW!!! I knew that Severus would figure it out, but I really didn't expect him to do something as dramatic as he did!!! I can't wait to see what he does when he finds out about Ron hitting Hermione.... hope he & Albus kick his (_!_) !!! Can't wait for chapter 8, really loving your story!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 28, 2003
    Still reading friend. You've slowed down a bit. ;) I am very much looking forward to more from you. This is such a great fic!!
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  • From ANON - Shell on November 28, 2003
    You have an amazing gift for story telling, I hope you finish this.
    it will be a shame if you dont.

    I hope to see alot more of this Fic soon.

    M.
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  • From ANON - DemonicAngel on November 28, 2003
    Excellent story, I am truly looking forw ard to the next update.
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  • From darc on November 28, 2003
    This has to one of the most original and interesting stories that I have ever read. I can't wait to read what is going to happen next. Keep up the brilliant work and I will be waiting for the next chapter.
    Have you posted this story anywhere else? If not is there any way that you could alert me when you post your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on November 28, 2003
    Wow - this is without a doubt one of the most original plotlines I've read in a long long while. Also very well-written, and I am proof that the story pulls the reader in (I was PLANNING on only reading the first couple of chapters cuz I have to go to work... and here I still am :) ). Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Irol on November 28, 2003
    Original story. The chracters just make you want to love or hate them... it's wonderful. I just wanna kick Ron. That is how well written he is. I just love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Flick on November 28, 2003
    Wonderful plot. Is Sev going to work it all out? And if Sev finds out about Ron I honestly dont want to know how angry he would get. Update soon plzzzzzzz:) I'll be waiting for more
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  • From ANON - BeautifullyMalicious on November 28, 2003
    This is so good. And you've found a truly original plot! Kudos to you. Please please PLEASE update soon! Email me when you do!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 28, 2003
    Just finished chapters 4 & 5... this just keeps getting better!!! I hope that Ron NEVER finds her!!! I can only imagine what Severus would do when he finds out that he had been abusive to Hermione?!? Will Sev put 2 & 2 together, the looks, the smell, will he remember the potion & figure it all out? Can't wait for MORE!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Talene on November 28, 2003
    I knew I wouldn't have to wait long....hehe Thanks you so much for that and I am still greedy qand still looking for more! Bless you for being kind enough to accomidate me so willingly! LOL More? Pleeeze?
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