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Reviews for New Beginning

By : Darkwriter
  • From ANON - SassMacfru on November 28, 2003
    Very good premise for this story, love it love it love it , and you update fast too! looking forward to the next chappies!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 28, 2003
    Mind you...I'm not complaining but I am I going to have to check every few minutes for an update? LOL The depression has passed. You write so very well. I wish i did as well. Waiting for another wonderful update. I'll likely check in about 15-30 mins. hehe Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 27, 2003
    I am so glad that you added chapter 3 already!!! Percy is just as much an (_!_) as his little brother!!! I am really curious to see how Severus handles things as he finds them out!!! Til chapter 4, Deb >^..^
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 27, 2003
    Ok....just read ch 3(?) and still reading. Didn't expect an update so soon but, I'm not complaining. I *am*, however, greedy enough to ask for more and soon. thanks and Happy Holidays.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 27, 2003
    Hi....When my hubby and I had ours we decided to give our childree une unusual name and one common one so they could choose at a later time which they would like to go with. I have had 5 children...the boys: Micheal Grayson, James Phelan and Lars Alexander. Grayson means son of the dawn or son of grey (at least according to the book we were looking at), Phela cel celtic for wolf and Lars means crowned with laurels. May I also suggest Peregrine (a type of falcon) and Dimitri. I realise you probably have already chosen the new name but...I just read this story so I am getting to it a little late. Sorry.

    Thsi is really a very nice story. I cried the whole while I was reading it. I understand his desire and often wish I could do similar. Please post again soon. I really am enjoying the story despite the tears. Depression is such fun. ;-p Waiting for more.....:)
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 27, 2003
    This is the 1st time I've read a story like this & I am really liking it so far!!! Ron has just proved himself to be a twit yet again!!! I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione & her son go to Hogwarts!!! Will Ron be showing up again or are you going to leave him out of the rest? Til next update, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Rilla on November 27, 2003
    Wow, what a unique plot! This looks interesting.
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  • From ANON - Louise on November 27, 2003
    Nice prologue. So Harry is the child that stirs feelings of fatherhood in Snape? Looking forward to seeing how Hermione comes to care for Harry. Also curious how ss/hg will occur.

    Just a quick beta - change 'temping' to 'tempting'.

    L.
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