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Reviews for Single Magical Male

By : k8gsmith
  • From ANON - Droxy on December 05, 2003
    There is a reason I don't normally stories with one or two chapters, I usually wait until the 4th chapter to start reading a story. This story just got better and better, as I returned to read up to 7.

    Chapter 6 with the dialog between Snape and H was well done.

    You did a great job on the lemons too. Lemonade is hard to make.

    The organization of chapters is good, one date per chapter is a good way to do it.

    Barrie is a great writer! Take good notes.

    I was suprised to see this line "Emerson, Lake and Palmer but she also had two of their albums (
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  • From ANON - Linda on December 05, 2003
    Absolutely great! You have everything in there. Humour ( I too laughed out loud in some parts), romance and the really passionate sex - but all so well written. I'll be on the lookout for your stories from now on.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on December 05, 2003
    What a story! What a chapter! That was fantastic! Hermione took the words out of my mouth! So did Severus! It was!!! It really really was!!! You can't stop here! You gotta write more! PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Barrie on December 05, 2003
    Woo-hoo! Lemony Fresh Goodness!!! You go girl! Wheeeee!

    Sorry, I am fine now. Very well articulated tale, madam. I find your use of nouns to be extremely invigorating.
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on December 05, 2003
    Yes, it definitely was. She sighs as she opens the closest window letting in the cold December air. It's getting a bit warm in here, isn't it?
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on December 05, 2003
    Wow! Didn't expect that, so it was a very nice surprise. : )~ Very hot, and very well done.


    Kiri
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  • From ladydeathfaerie on December 04, 2003
    oh my.... yes, a fan would be good tonight.

    i decided to read this, as it is intriguing to see how
    people pair the Master with Hermione. i must say
    yours is damned original, and i loved it.

    some of my most favorite bits were his duscussion
    with Dumbledore. from crap, to shit, to fuck. i was
    rolling with laughter.

    and then on to the first 'meeting.' that was another laugh
    riot. boxed wine, indeed.

    i think the funniest bit was Ron and Harry as a happy couple.
    i laughed out loud quite a few times. thanks so much for the
    laughter. i needed it.

    enjoyed this, i did. looking forward to more, i am.

    hey.... what the hell is yoda doing here? at any rate, keep
    up the good work.

    ~blessings~
    ldf

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  • From ANON - AlphaRyoko on December 04, 2003
    Whoa!

    Those were some mighty fine lemons, if I do say so myself. Well done! Bravo!

    *standing ovation*
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 04, 2003
    That was so sweet, romantic and lusty at the same time. AHHH!
    I feel really bad for Hermione's broken relationship with Harry and Ron. That was unexpected.
    Severus wasn't expecting her, was he?? I hope you have them stay together. (Sigh)
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 04, 2003
    Sometimes a woman has got to do what a woman has got to do & HOLY CRAP did Hermione ever do what she needed to!!! That was BEAUTIFUL!!! I really do like how you wrote the end of this chapter.... so overwed bed by it all that those few words said it all!!! Now I really can't wait to see what happens when they finally face Albus & the ladies!!! Til next chapter, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Snapesgirl51606 on December 03, 2003
    Great story. I really enjoyed reading it. keep writing cant wait to read what happens next
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  • From Barrie on December 03, 2003
    Katie-baby! That was a wonderful chapter! You go girl! Can't wait for the next chappie!

    Barrie
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  • From ANON - Silvana on December 03, 2003
    BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! It figures those two would talk so long. The pizza line was my favorite though. :D
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  • From ANON - SandraM on December 03, 2003
    Hi, it's me again. I just finished Chapter 6. It's very good, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.
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  • From ANON - SandraM on December 03, 2003
    Hi, let me state first that this is NOT a flame. I don't do those. I just started reading the story and have only one comment at the moment. If you decide to change, fine. If not, well it's your story. Tom is the bartender at the Leaky Cauldron in London, Madame Rosmerta is at the Three Broomsticks in Hogsmeade.

    Well, back to my reading. See ya.
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