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Reviews for Who Do You Want?

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - mysticsong on November 21, 2006
    I really enjoyed this a lot. :)
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  • From ANON - Adorina Mae on November 12, 2005
    Write a Sequel!!!! Please there aren't enough sappy/smutty stories
    It was so cute but so improbable
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  • From ANON - Sheila on October 31, 2005
    I would love to see a continuation of this story. Please keep up the great work and send a new sequel soon.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on October 30, 2005
    This is one of the best fics I've ever read, and I've read more than I care to admit. You made the romance between Hermione and Severus more than believable. Now I have to go and see if any of the sequels you mentioned at the end have actually been written. I would like to see Draco, Ginny and Ron get theirs. If they haven't been, can I plead for them now?
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  • From ANON - Killisandra on October 09, 2005
    you can't leave the story off there. I just read the whole thing and you have got to finish the damn thing. Like a confrontation between Ron and Hermione. Or an argument between Hermione and Snape? Add a little more depth to it. Come on, I thought this was going to be so much better. Please update or open the story again but don't forget to put a disclaimer in there because the new mediators for AFF are getting rid of any stories with out disclaimers. I hope you heed my advice.
    Blessed Be,
    ~Sandra~
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  • From ANON - jose on August 18, 2005

    That was very good. It's not my Snape you've written about. Mine would not ever show himself to be vulnarable but you convinced me using yours for a while. He is very very well thought out. You almost made me weep. And, to be honest, you can really write about sex!!!! You got me excited, I am not into leather that much but your slow sex was exquisite. Very very good, thank you for writing that
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  • From ANON - Anijade on March 22, 2005
    This is a great story but why did you change the ending. I liked knowing what happened to them
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  • From ANON - Moi on March 22, 2005
    pixie doodle! I laughed myself to tears!
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  • From ANON - Lexie on March 05, 2005
    Definately add a sequel. I think you should start maybe a few days or weeks after the proposal.
    I love both of your stories so far! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Lysa on December 16, 2004
    Beautyful. Thanks.
    Sequel, please.
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  • From ANON - Suzanne on December 01, 2004
    I LOVE this story! I keep coming back to read it over and over. I would love to read the sequel! Very talented writing and very good characterization, Severus is portrayed so well, I love it!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Suzanne Root on July 16, 2004
    Utterly magnificent. MORE!!! LOL! You write better than any other fanfic writer I have read. Thank you :-)
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  • From ANON - Lana Manckir on June 07, 2004
    I love your story! very sweet! I'd love a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Templar on March 08, 2004
    Excellent story. The ending felt a little rushed going from proposing to two and half children, but other than that, it was a very enjoyable read. I can't help but think that perhaps this story deserves another couple of chapters or possibly a sequel or two. Please keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Jean Lamb on February 09, 2004
    Splendid story--and I do want to see Draco suffer. That's just good, clean fun as far as I'm concerned. More!
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