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Reviews for Who Do You Want?

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - mommyhelperlady on January 21, 2004
    I loved this story. I've seen people harsh to the outside world quite greatful and awed by the love
    of a beautiful woman.

    Please write more. Your lemons were the yummiest. I love the detail and you
    dont' rush through it. And, I get tired sometimes of all the angst, struggle and
    darkness in many SS/HG romances. Thier meeting at the party and subsiquent love making were my
    favorite part.

    This was one of the most romantic stories I have read lon long time. Thank you for not being afraid
    to be a little mushy. Don't we all want what they have in your story? The pace of the romance was
    not too fast either. It was just time for it to happen. They already knew there wasn't anyone else
    who would understand them.

    As I said, pleasite ite more and keep up the wonderful steamy scenes.

    Hugs,
    Mommyhelperlady

    Ps sorry no time to run spell check. I already stayed up past my bedtime to finish the story.
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  • From ANON - aphrodeia on December 21, 2003
    Ah, I've just come across this story and I have to say, it's now one of my favorites. Excellent work, I'd love to see a sequel (if there's not one already in the works)!
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on December 04, 2003
    Wonderful story.
    I thoroughly enjoyed it and would love to see a sequel
    Kisses
    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - anke on December 04, 2003
    This was one the best and most erotic fanfics I've ever r I f I fell in love with Snape reading this one. You're an incredible writer. I want to rape someone now!
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  • From ANON - trulymad on December 04, 2003
    Betz, I'd loved this--Your story is one of the most erotic I've ever read! And intelligent too. I also identified with the themes of lonliness and redemption through love. I'd love for you to continue (I'm laughing now at the thought of the wedding party!). Thanks for a great story, trulymad
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  • From ANON - linthal on December 04, 2003
    i do not normally review story
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  • From ANON - shiv on December 03, 2003
    I liked this story very much. I thought the characterisation of Hermione and why she would suddenly take an interest in Severus was well-drawn; similarly with the characterisation of a vulnerable Severus. You managed to pack a lot of incident into a short space of time and, although it stretched credibility a little, you felt so much goodwill towards the couple that you allowed yourself to be swept along by the story.
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  • From ANON - MaddyRiddle on December 03, 2003
    WOW! I love the story. It's great!
    (Well I would love to say more but your story left me speechless, sorry)
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  • From ANON - jenbachand on December 02, 2003
    :) What a lovely story. I'd love to see a sequel, but where you've left it is great too. It was a wonderful story. If you do write a sequel, you could have a great fight scene between Ron & Severus where they come to an understanding and perhaps get trashed together. You also didn't mention it, but it almost seemed as if Ron and Harry were a couple? Maybe they are just still really close and all thier children play together.

    Great story!!!

    Jen :)
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  • From ANON - Leah on December 02, 2003
    wow, oh, yay, greatness!!! that was the best. thank you for keeping our darling precious Severus and Hermione in character. wow again, twenty points to your house of choice. :) and you MUST write a sequel. we don't want the poor little bunnies to starve, now do we? no, because that wouldcruecruel, and i would have to hunt you down and force a pen into your hand.
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  • From ANON - Leah on December 02, 2003
    dear goodness. i'm partway through part two, but i had to stop and review. drunk minrva cracked me up, and your sev/mione pairing is the sweetest one i've ever read. honestly, i could have cried. so write on, ye of the golden quill, and put Rowling to shame! ~ a very satisfied Leah
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on December 02, 2003
    ::raises hand in air:: I'll beg for a sequel. : )~ Loved the story. A classic romance. Well done.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Jihan on December 02, 2003
    Love it. Great story. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Susan K in Texas on December 01, 2003
    Wonderful, wonderful story... so detailed, loved how you showed us why they acted the way they did, letting us in on their feelings and insecurities, laughed, cried, enjoyed the loving! ;) Would love to read a sequel, or any other stories you might write, esp about SS/HG!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 01, 2003
    It took me the better part of the day, but I just finished your story & I LOVE IT!!! I vote for a sequel!!! Deb >^..^
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