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Reviews for Who Do You Want?

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - Texas Peach on December 01, 2003
    I loved this story. It had the right amount of humor to offset the romance, which can be sometimes overdone. Not in this story but in others. I'd like to see a sequel, when their kids get to Hogwarts and what happened to Harry and Ron. How did their lives turn out.
    Great work.

    Thanks for a great sto
    Tex
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 01, 2003
    That was a lovely story.
    Sure, a sequel would be good to fill in the empty space between the engagement and the 2 children (w/ 2 more on the way)
    If you decide to write more, I will look forward to it.
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  • From ANON - lizski on December 01, 2003
    Very nice! I think that was really well done. A sequel would be sort of nice - particularly Draco's reaction to Hermione, and whether Draco apprentices with Snape, etc. etc. Anyway, this was great!
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  • From ANON - SassMacfru on December 01, 2003
    Very good story, would love to see more! Keep up the good work!!

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  • From ANON - Rei on December 01, 2003
    Very good! Not bad at all, for a first draft! A sequel might be nice, if you're up to writing one...
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  • From ANON - SandraM on December 01, 2003
    Please do continue. I thought this was excellent. Just a few minur problems that a good Beta could repair.
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  • From ANON - Sherrafina on December 01, 2003
    LOVED IT!!!! I have never read anything of yours, so I was in for a ple pleasant suprise!! Thanks for a wonderful read!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Aoibheann on December 01, 2003
    Nice job. I seriously laughed until tears came to eyes when I read this: "Severus tried not to flinch at her father's pet name for her. There was nothing affectionate about being named after the fecal matter of a magical four-inch terror with wings." And I got teary for other reasons when you fic tugged at the heartstrings. For not being betaed, there's only a small amount of cleanup that your fic needs!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on December 01, 2003
    Incredible fic! I loved reading this! I hope that you will be feeling better soon!

    Hugs,
    Ness
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  • From ANON - Laurence on December 01, 2003
    Hi!
    I like your story a lot, but, french being my mothertongue, I can't help to correct your expression...

    "Je nous vois seul ne dine pas." is very bad french(dobby like if you see what I mean...)
    "I see we are not dining alone" would be "je vois que nous ne dinons pas seul" but you 't s't say that in french, in a good restaurant, people would say "je vois que Monsieur est accompagn
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  • From ANON - Mary Kay on December 01, 2003
    Whatever begging you want, please let me know. I shall be happy to do it. It was lovely to be able to read a story in one sitting. I see nothing OOC about any of the characters. In fact, I rarely am bothered by OOC, except when they sound like adolescent conversation overh in in a mall. I will tell you that this story will be added to my favorites so it does not get lost in pages of AFF. I will look forwar see seeing your name on stories. Excellent job. Well done.

    Mary Kay
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