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Reviews for A Tale of Two Men

By : DarkLoveZorg
  • From ANON - idiotic savant on February 16, 2004
    Chapter 13: Nice filler chapter; plenty of action and dialogue from the support cast, which adds plenty of connectivity amongst the other chapters. Love Lupin's and Molly's involvement. The Twins remind me of those "Queer Eye for the Straight Guy" crew-i.e. planning the bachelor party, knowledge of the upcoming wedding details, etc. Hmm, wonder what the have planned for Mr. Black? ;-)

    Off to read the next chappie.

    idiotic savant
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on February 16, 2004
    This is a great story. Looking forward to more. Hope to see it soon. Hope Sev and Siri sort themselves out. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - idiotic savant on January 30, 2004
    Hello. Just finished reading chapter 11. (I know, I know, I should have read it some time ago. Mea culpa.)

    It's wonderful how everything worked out in this chapter. Great build up from the previous ones, all leading up to the events in chappie 11.

    Wonderful lovemaking scene - sweet, tender, sexy and uber-creative. I did not mind the 'fluffiness' because, as I stated, there was a progression leading up to it. It's not like they jumped into bed and it was all romance right from the start; that approach just would not work with these two.

    Hmm, planning on throwing a monkey wrench into the proceedings, are you? Don't make promises you won't keep. ;)

    As always, looking forward to future works.

    idiotic savant
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  • From ANON - idiotic savant on January 18, 2004
    Hi. Apologies for the late review. (Now, that I think about it, I should have read your latest chapters sooner!)

    Cross-dressing, bondage, blackmail photos, Amaretto and food IN addition to the standard vanilla action ALL in one sex scene? Aack, be still my beating heart! Bring it on, baby! And judging from the size of a certain appendage, methinks that Sirius's Animagus form should have been a horse. :-)

    Enjoyed the bit about how Remus figured into the equation, by the way. It added depth and history into Sirius/Severus dynamic.

    I loved the interaction among everyone in Scotland; it fleshed out a lot of the supporting characters.

    Your sex scenes are superb. Bve mve me, I know what I'm talking about. ;-)

    Can't wait for more.

    idiotic savant
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on January 09, 2004
    This is the bomb. This is getting real good. This story is great great great. Please don't make Siri have second thoughts. Siri and Sevi are soooo good together. Keep it up mate.
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  • From ANON - -x on January 09, 2004
    This. Is. Great. Plz let there be a nice happy future for Siri and Sev. Please?
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  • From ANON - idiotic savant on January 08, 2004
    Ah, where to begin, where to begin? I just finished reading chapters 6 and 7. What a blast!

    The so-called thin line between love and hate is so palpable between Black and Snape. The way you write their interactions is brilliant. Realistic without the over-the-top melodrama that is pervasive in most of the Black/Snape fics I have read. Bravo! And Harry and Ron are having so much fun! I've said this before, and I'll say it again: these two relationships are at the opposite ends of the spectrum, and how you seamlessly jump from one to the other is superb.

    The Tweetybird curse is priceless.

    And is that "The Main Event (Enough is enough)" that Dumbledore was warbling? Naughty girl!

    Can't wait for the rest.

    idiotic savant
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  • From ANON - idiotic savant on December 22, 2003
    Hi. I'm enjoying this story a lot. It's great how you juxtapose Harry/Ron's fun-filled and innocent shagging with Black/Snape's complex and many-layered relationship. I like the deft way you write how some of the pairings started, really matter-of-fact instead of going through some long-winded explanation. And I love the throwaway kink! (Padfoot with Snape! Incest with twincest!)

    My only suggestion would be for you to concentrate on your main pairings and not deviate too much from them. The fifth cha sex sex was hot, but it did not seem to have any bearing on the whole story. Mind ythisthis is not a complaint (sex is always good), just an observation. I apologize in advance if everything gets all tied in together in future chapters. Good work so far.

    idiotic savant
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on December 09, 2003
    It's great to see a Sirius/Snape fic. Hope to see them get together. This story is really good. Please carry on with it. I'm new to this place myself. I've just posted a story called A Christmas Gift. It's a Harry/Snape fanfic. Don't worry. This story is great.
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  • From ANON - Great Writer sarah on December 09, 2003
    hauntingly disturbing ..... but good.
    plz write more.
    o.o;;;
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  • From ANON - FearlessFirefly on December 07, 2003
    Uh ....... huh. Very nice. And we just can't wait for chapter 3 .... 'we'? The voices in my head, of course!
    VoicesInHead(Sirius,Snape,Ron,Fred,George,Lupin,Tonks,Hooch) W00t!
    Please write more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2003
    I really like this fic, but can you stick to Sirius and Snape a bit more? They are the main pairing, right?
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  • From ANON - Sher on December 03, 2003
    Great first chapter! Sirius seems to be able to have chemistry with just about anybody, but with Snape, it's even more pronounced because the two dislike each other so much, so for that reason alone, I've found myself really enjoying this pairing. Sirius Black was one of two characters that got me hooked on HP in the first place (the other being a certain older, blonde Slytherin). Since the disaster that was OOtP, I've only been reading AU Sirius fics, so I'm glad I found this one. :D

    I look forward to reading more from you :-). Well done!

    Cheers!
    Sher
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