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Reviews for Deadly Nightshade

By : Hijja
  • From Ledaswann on September 28, 2011
    Beautifully written!

    Rather abstract but really engaging. Really well done.
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  • From Shay on July 18, 2007
    Wow...I definitely dig this. I like how strongly you played out the emotional aspect of it, rather than writing it as "look how kinky Death Eaters can be!" Great work.
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  • From ANON - Shannon on November 22, 2006
    wow! a second person narrative...you don't see many of those! good work man!
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  • From ANON - nikki on July 23, 2006
    i don't see why you should be so insecure about it. sure, it deviates from the typical PWP stories you'd normally find but this has it's charm. Tonks, ah, you'd feel sorry for her, but then, there's always Bellatrix, sadistic, twisted...you showed them well. After all, in the stories, Tonks does play a minor part and you don't really think of her as insecure so this was a refreshing new view on the family entaglements. Nice work!
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  • From Hijja on December 12, 2003
    Dear a. nony. mous.,
    I just have to point out how very much I appreciate your feedback. Youof cof course spot on about OOC-ness, and you caught me right out about gratuitously playing around with stream-of-consciousness :). Thanks not only for your honest reaction, but also for posting constructive criticism for something you did *not* like. That's more than I could have asked for, and makes me deeply grateful. I'll try and avoid further pitfalls in the future :).
    Most sincere thanks, Hijja
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  • From ANON - a. nony. mous. on December 02, 2003
    Nervousness is warranted; it just doesn't really...work. The interruptions with Tonks' thoughts are trying to be stream of consciousness, but don't manage to be compelling enough, and the way the time flows (up to the point of the beginning, it seems) really gives it away as the literary trick it is--oddly enough, good stream of consciousness writing generally has to be very planned out. Bellatrix getting kinky with her niece also doesn't really work-she seems to be a real race fanatic. (Not to mention, when did she get the free time?) I really like some of your other work--I think Art of War is the best--but this doesn't even really have an emotional impact. Not a flame, just an honest reaction. :)
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