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Reviews for Turn Back Time

By : SStarLuna
  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2003
    asskicking fic, very good, if you need a beta email me erick_usa@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Smiigel on December 15, 2003
    This fic is so cute. ^.^ Hehheh. I really like the Harry/Remus/Tonks friendly-type relationship-like thing (don't I sound eloquent); they're some of my favorite characters. Tonks is such a nut, and I can totally see her as Harry's big sister. The slow buildup is good--I like fics that take their time, rather than just throwing the readers into it. It's more difficult to write that way, I think, but that makes it better. I also like the fact that you didn't give the pairing (if there will be one) straight out (and no very bad pun intended, really). I'm of thf those people who prefers the mystery of it all. :D Most of your grammatical mistakes have to do with punctuation concerning dialogue, but I've enjoyed the rest of the fic so much that I don't notice anymore (yeah, I'm really nit-picky about grammatical stuff... it makes me sound stuck-up, very likely, but hey, we can't help our hang-ups). I'm not trying to sound snobby or bitchy or anything--just a little comment. Constructive criticism, yah? Just, y'know, keel pel periods, commas, exclamation and question points within the quotation marks and... yeah. Heh heh heh... ^^; I'll be lookin' forward to more! Keep up ze good work, luv. :D
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  • From ANON - Waywren Truesong on December 14, 2003
    Tonks, luv, you'd do that anyway. Now it's just official. ^^

    Brilliant thing with the conquering of the Black Matriarch! Is he going to burn it? If he does, I suggest Muggle means. A lighter, perhaps? ^^
    'm s'm so glad of the night with Moony, and, really, the entire relationship between Harry and Remus and Tonks and Harry. Harry and Remus need all the family they can get, and you couldn't ask for a better than those three.

    Can't wait for more chapters - I pounce on this every time I see it. And, Harry, I assure you, you do -not- look stupid in those trousers. *grynz*
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  • From ANON - X-Lander on December 12, 2003
    Very interesting story so far. Harry's birthday was nice and the talk with Moony was great. Love Tonks teasing him about the leather pants. Gotta wonder about the necklace that Bill and Charley gave him. Any magical properties? He still is obviously very depressed by Sirius' death. Nice to see Neville there with the gang. That shouting match with Mrs. Black's painting was interesting. Wonder what he's about to do? Really like this so far but feel it's a shame that it will eventually turn into a slash story. Pity, as it's going so well and I'll never read the end as I abhore m/m slash. I'll keep reading until it happens though. Maybe you could write a non-slash version as well?
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  • From ANON - Padfoot_Girl54 on December 10, 2003
    ARE YOU MAD!!! major cliff hanger what the hell! this story rocks except for that bit!
    PLEAAASSSE writte more soon!
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  • From ANON - tkiwi on December 10, 2003
    great start so far! is this going to be a Harry/Remus fic? i just love slash! *giggles* makes me wish i were a sexy male bitch... *sighs contendidly at the thought( erm, yea, anyways... moving on to the second chappie! great job on the first once again!

    -Kiwi
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  • From on December 06, 2003
    not bad. i think you should go into why neville is staying, and why is the title turn back time?
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  • From ANON - shellava on December 04, 2003
    This is just to say I'm looking forward to seeing more of the story
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  • From ANON - JPHelen of Troy on December 04, 2003
    I LOVE this story!!!!!! Please write more soon!!!!!!!!
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