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Reviews for Turn Back Time

By : SStarLuna
  • From ChaosLady on July 27, 2011
    I'm sorry I didn't review this while I was reading it. Then I forgot at the end. It's good. Although there is a few things wrong with it. I'm not sure whether this was written before or after the sixth book but clearly you didn't know how long the DADA class had been cursed. Nor did you seem to know the names of the Death Eaters that Snape hung out with at school:Mulciber, Avery, the Carrows etc. Other than that it was good. I hope you update sometime soon.
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  • From ANON - NeverTooOld on May 02, 2005
    Very nice story. Time travel stories can be very difficult to write--the problems with paradox and decisions affecting the future are significant, but you seem to be doing a very good job of handling them.

    It's interesting to see how Harry stacks up against his father and the other Marauders, stronger in some places, weaker in others, but definitely able to hold his own. I suspect that he wasn't going all out against the DADA professor and his studies during the summer have been a big help.

    I do see one possible problem--Lily seems to like Harry more than she likes James, and even though Harry knows better, she doesn't, and she may end up comparing James to Harry--which could be seriously detrimental to Harry's prospects for being born!!

    Anyways, I'm looking forward to seeing updates soon.


    Thanks very much,

    NeverTooOld
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  • From ANON - Sirei on December 19, 2004
    Hey I must say your Story is very good and the best i've seen so far from Harry Potter......
    I think you should update again soon^^.
    The Idea that Harry teleportate is really original and your describing from the relationships between the Characters is as good as J.K Rowlings.
    It's very interesting to see how Harry would interact with his parents and how Pettigrew became Voldemorts Lackey and how Snape was in school.
    I think shouldn't involve himself with someone of the past.....because i hope he goes back to his time and then she(or he even when i don't like that)
    would be over 20 years older.
    But to think that Harry for example told Dumbledore should be there at his oncles house and let Hagrid take Harry from the place where his parents died.
    That Harry himself gave Dumbledore the tip that Voldemort would kill his parents or who Tom Riddle is or....
    You see everything what makes Dumbledore seem to know from the Future could be coming from Harry himself if he told him that...
    And as we have seen in the third book that everything was planned to funcionate like this and nobody would miss Harry because he came exact when he was teleported in the past.
    Still your story is good and as you can see also reasonable^^
    Byebye yours
    Sirei
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  • From ANON - susie on March 21, 2004
    I love the story but YOU REALLY NEED TO ADD MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - susie on March 21, 2004
    I love the story but YOU REALLY NEED TO ADD MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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  • From ANON - Dianna on March 17, 2004
    Please update soon. I mean really really soon. Who does Harry like?! I want to see all my questions answered, thank you very much. If you need a beta, I'd be happy to take on the job.
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  • From ANON - Nishi no Tochi Okusama on March 05, 2004
    Hello dear author of Turn Back Time. I have finally finished up to the tenth chapter of your story on my second day of reading it. I must say that you have a way with words. You have an exquisite talent and I do declare that you may be a great writer someday. I know I'm probably starting to sound weird with my Scarlett O' Hara tendencies of talking, but I greatly admire your work. I wish I could write a longer review for you, but as my time is short and I must pack to leave for North Carolina, this is all I can give you. Please do continue writing this marvelous story. Nishi no Tochi Okusama
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  • From ANON - Limegreenlion on February 15, 2004
    This is such a great fic, I love it. I like the way you expanded on the remus and tonks' personalities and kind of made them your own. please please PLEASE update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Merrideth on February 14, 2004
    So peter is still the little rat he has always been now he is just trying to make james happy instead of Voldemort. I like this story. Please continue to update.

    Merrideth
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  • From ANON - Waywren Truesong on February 02, 2004
    Another chapter at last! Hurrah! And Harry actually -in- the past! Huzzah! And so on.

    Ooooh. Healer!Harry. I -love- Healer!Harry in every possible iterat..
    ..

    The conversation with Dumbledore was bloody well fascinating; I continue to marvel knowingly at Harry's mental abilities. And the bit with realising that Dumbledore (and later Peter) wasn't the same as the one(s) who had hurt him so was very nice, and one of those lovely marks of how Harry has matured ... if only he'd stop blaming himself for everything. Damnit, Harry, you were acting as your nature dictated, and you -didn't- kill him. It was Sirius' choice, swear to God.

    Not that he can hear me, of course.

    It'll be interesting to see how he gets on with Lily; he's certainly not his dad, after all, at least not pre-James-Maturation. Or should that be Deflation? Must wonder if Harry Granger (*snickers* I'll bet Hermione would just -love- that) will have anything to do with said deflating...

    I do hope Harry'll get a break from Thingy-resonance in this time. It's not as if the event that caused the link has happened yet, after all.

    Tho with the evil louder in this time than it is in his, I suppose it's inevitable that -something- will happen. Can't wait to find out! ks fks for sharing this with us.
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  • From ANON - Maven on January 30, 2004
    Great story so far. The speech to Snape was impressive! I was applauding Harry for standing up to the git!
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  • From ANON - Merrideth on January 30, 2004
    I appreciate the thanks, and I am really looking foward for an update again soon. I love this story line and I feel sorry for Harry not being able to reveal anything that he's been through.

    Merrideth

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  • From ANON - BakaChan on January 29, 2004
    come now ya gotta update soon
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  • From ANON - lee marker on January 14, 2004
    I love it update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Merrideth on January 13, 2004
    I JUST CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO FINISH THIS STORY!!!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHERE IT IS GOING!!!! I LOVE WHAT YOU'VE DONE SO FAR!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!

    Merrideth
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