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Reviews for Gray and White

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - kate on December 09, 2003
    Well, this was a surprise to find! You evil author you. I suspect the real reason you hid this from me was so that I wouldn't try to get Tali to come help me with my kitchen.

    A gentle, almost bittersweet ending to thittlittle refrain; I can identify with Tali's desire to please and fit in, balanced against Remus' more weary understanding that some people just never will be mainstream. Yet, they still have each other. **contented sigh**
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  • From ANON - Droxy on December 08, 2003
    Are you going to turn me into a Lupin fan? I love Tali. Is this going to become it's own story?

    I like the imaginative interconnection Tali and Lupin have. It's so sweet. I love that they can read each other's minds.

    My personal fave in the HP series was Harry's trip to Ollivanders. Thanks for taking me back there!
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 08, 2003
    I loved your description of Mollysleysley. I knew it was her before you named her. Round little woman who talked non-stop.

    I also especialnjoynjoyed the scene in Ollivander's. The wand sings to her... that is so cool.

    Love your writing. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - tamargrl on December 07, 2003
    So glad you're still gracing us with your wonderful stories.
    I was truly amazed by the clarilty of your writing in the wolf scenes. It captured all the emotions so perfectly. And I was greatly amused by how it differed from when you wrot fro from Sn's p's perspective (as well it should). Lovely job. We all hungrily await E Pluribus.
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  • From ANON - kate on December 07, 2003
    You already know how much I love your imagery but the whole "Roshomon" idea of giving us the different realities -- priceless, neh?

    I'm so glad to be able to understand why Tali and Lupin fell so hard for each other. As usual in your stories, it was a complete mystery until you spelled it out. Once you wrote it, it became impossible to imagine any other reality.

    As always, the key to your work is in a combination: description and dialogue. You evoke such crystalline pictures in my mind while fleshing out characters through dialogue.

    Thankfully there's more from the Barrie fount to come, or so I've heard. On good authority....
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 07, 2003
    Ahhhh! That was so sweet! (A good kind of sweet, not cloying.)
    Do you have a couple more chapters for your ficlet? I hope so cuz like I said... this is so sweet.

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Droxy on December 06, 2003
    Great little subrosa ficlet.

    Interesting to see Snape from Lupin's POV.
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  • From ANON - kate on December 05, 2003
    I love the Sub Rosa universe and I'm so glad to get the chance to find out more about these two especially. As usual, your writing is fi wit with wonderful imagery and great dialogue. Can't wait to read more -- and I get to read it often!! heh heh heh
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  • From ANON - mouse on December 04, 2003
    You do know that Elves in the Harry Potter universe resemble Dobby.
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