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Reviews for Atlantis

By : Hunnypeach
  • From ANON - anonymous surfer on December 16, 2003
    oist.... nice fic... pls. continue...
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on December 15, 2003
    Cool!!

    Another fabulous chapter!
    I can't wait to see wat happens when Draco and Hermione meet up!
    More soon plz
    Kisses
    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - Fi on December 14, 2003
    I love this story. Draco seems so different but at the same time the same old Malfoy. I'm not really into this ship but after reading this I think I'll read it a bore.ore. Can't wait for the next chapter.
    ~Fi~
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  • From ANON - Serpent du feu on December 14, 2003
    Lemme just say that this is your best work so far! It
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  • From ANON - Elise on December 14, 2003
    After the first chapter I was kind of hesitant to read on because I wasn't sure if there was going to be another five songs...which I will have to say, for constructive criticism's sake, that five songs is indeed overkill for one chapter. But other than that, your writing is remarkable! It's how great of a writer you are that kept me reading, and I'm glad I continued. It's a unique plot, I will say. But I'm enjoying it nonetheless. I hope to see updates soon. I'll be keeping my eye out for some more Atlantis. Heh. Nice work!
    ~Elise
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  • From ANON - Brian on December 13, 2003
    good story, but you could have chosen better songs, granted i like each of those bands but each one of them has better songs for those kind of occasions. my personal choices would have been: "You Gave Your Love To Me Softly" by Weezer; "Mrs. You & Me" by Smoking Popes; and "Sexy Plexi" by Jack Johnson. but that's just my take on it, you are the artist here. Other than those song choices i like the story a lot.
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on December 13, 2003
    AHHHHH! I LOVE this story! Update update update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on December 13, 2003
    I really love this story! Thanks for the updates--it getst better with each chapter!
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  • From ANON - Nearly Headless Ra on December 13, 2003
    Sorry! I was out all day and only just got back so I couldn't review earlier! Well, anyways since I managed to finish ur latest chapter - this is all I have to say: Definitely your BEST work to date! It's a very rare read in DM/HG fandom, not too dark, not too romantic, not too comedic - I guess, it's a "romantic comedy" in a genre. A very good easy nice warm read that leaves you feeling giddy, fuzzy and wanting more. It kinda reminded me of "Bridget Jones' Diary" plus "The Object of My Affection" kinda stories. I absolutely *heart* it!!! Wowee! Encore! Encore! Encore! I couldn't find any loopholes at all, in fact, I liked it how you revealed more and more with each other - how they had a past with one another, how Ron found out, unfound feelings, and yet there is a intricate plot of angst, ROCK, HOT Draco, and everything waiting to explode! I liked Ginny's charcter too - very bubbly, funky and what I imagined she would be like in many ways. We'll have to wait and see how Harry's and Ron's character develop then I'll see. I especially like your uses of dreams and flashbacks, and we'll be having more of that I suspect. This is really a diversion from all your previous HG/DM works which were all somewhat angsty, sad and dark...I rather think you have a knace at writing light comedy, personally I'm too dark, can't seem to read any light romantic comedy, so this is just my perfect pill :p I think the story is going fine, you are taking the time to develop your story and plot, and inserting a little humor now and then... I guess the only thing is to take the time to explore Draco's feelings for her - how could he have remained so fixated on her in the first place, and how it could have lasted that long. And yes, seeing as this is centered around a rock band - and this is the same advice I give Nual for her DM/HG fic "Rebirth of Lucifer" - just make sure that music and songs is an integral part of your story every now and then! Your story is going along perfectly...can't wait to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - star on December 13, 2003
    update girlfriend I want no! I have to know what hap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 13, 2003
    Chapter 3 is FANTASTIC!!! I like the flashback, gives a better insight into the relationship that they had. I also like how you wrote Ron in that part, what a heart!!!

    Why did Draco Obliviate Ginny if he ends up sending her flowers & a note?

    Can't wait for chapter 4, hoping their meeting is good for both of them.... in more ways than 1;-) Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2003
    Yay!!! [claps hands excitedly], this just keeps get fun funner !
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  • From ANON - tom4eva on December 13, 2003
    exellent story!! soo original! i read draco rock star and i just luv it!!! and i love the way you write the characters feeling here!! soo ic!!!
    pls update and continue asap! cuz this story is really great!!!

    LOTSA XOXOX!
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  • From ANON - The sweetest things on December 13, 2003
    Great story. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - psr on December 12, 2003
    Loved it even more!
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