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Reviews for Play Time at Hogwarts

By : PotterSlash420
  • From bill560682 on March 22, 2009
    i personally would have liked to see colin/dennis/harry also harry and the patil twins also harry/fluer/gabby.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Nocturnali on December 08, 2003
    This could be better. There seemsbe abe a lot of 'juice'. The slang is a bit tacky.
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  • From ANON - star on December 07, 2003
    that was interesting
    i guess
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  • From ANON - goddessblkrose on December 07, 2003
    This stor, so, so far, very disturbing - but not for the right reasons (in my opinion). I have written BDSM, slash, and all sorts of other 'disturbing' erotica, and it requires a certain finesse if you want to do anything but make the reader sick at heart and stomach. Emotion, motivation, what they are thinking and feeling; these are the things that MAKE a story, and all are lacking in this so far. If your aim is simply to wtite about mechanical sexual acts and blood and violence, then you have succeeded. If you wish to write truly moving - and that includes disturbing people - I think you should go back and read the best of the genre and take some notes on what makes those stories good and try and apply them to your future work.
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on December 07, 2003
    Will you have one with Draco and Hermione? Please say 'yes'! :)
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