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By : PotionsMistressM
  • From PinkTribeChick on January 29, 2004
    Awesome couple of chapters! I still can't believe how blind and stubborn Dumbledore is being! Anyway . . . very sweet scenes . . . nice background of Severus's family history. I would seriously love to see a separate story made up of just Severus's "journal" entries to Hermione . . . would be inteing ing to read . . .
    Keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D
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  • From ANON - casi on January 28, 2004
    *waves* its me again. I tend to forget stuff when I reveiw. I know i mentioned snape being out of charecter a little bit but I realized I didnt explain where I saw this. There were two things I noticed that kinda made me giggle because it was just something you would never see snape say. I can only remeber one though and that was earlier on when Snape said something 'kicked ass' As an author we can charecterize the person as we see fit but even with your charecterization it just seemed really awkward to have snape say that.

    I also forgot to add I LOVE your use of humor. I love darkfics but you can only be so dark until you've done it all. You have to add another element in there and your humor just works so well. I was copying and pasting parts to a friend as I was leaving. the whole hufflepuff as a puppydog thing was great. I also loved hermiones comment "I Have people who understand me... crookshanks.... ect" I loved that!


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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on January 28, 2004
    Hurrah!!

    You updated!!

    That was fab. I like the idea that pain relief would loosen the tongue, alcohol does it for me!!

    But what now??, do we have smut? Does Albus find out?Is thre a happy ending??

    Can't wait to see what happens next!!

    I'm assuming that the fact that you have gt seventeen reviews for this chapter (so far, including mine!!) means that you will be continuing with the story and so I won't have to bombard you with thirty e-mails a day to convince you to keep writng this wonderful story????

    Kisses
    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - pyewacket on January 28, 2004
    I love this story. I am quite fof stf stories where Dumbledore is seen as a manipulator and not the sweet old man everyone thinks he is. I do hope you will keep writing and eventually finish this work. I find it very entertaining and well written.
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  • From ANON - mele on January 28, 2004
    you want more reviews befyouyou'll start updating? okay, here's one. please, please, please update soon. i want you to kick dumbledore's butt. yes hermione is his ward, but can't he see how unhappy he has made both she and severus? he should at least have allowed them to talk. maybe you could have them fake the romeo and juliet death scene and dumbledore could lament his interfering ways. or maybe minerva could teach hermione how to be an animagus and she and severus could sneak out together? i s ths the logical thing would have minerva talking dumbledore into chaperoned visits but that would be too boring. how bout they get married next week while he's still gone? nah, too simple.
    you see you are the creative genius, not me... so get writing! aloha, mele
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  • From ANON - Katze on January 28, 2004
    Love your fic, but I hope Albus gets his talking-to some time soon. And I'm still eager for some Malfoy-bashing :P

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Florentia on January 28, 2004
    LOVED it mate!! Cried when Severus almost died. SO glad he FINALLY cracked a smile!! :) Songs were very moving with this chapter.:)
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  • From ANON - coriander on January 28, 2004
    I apologize for not reviewing earlier. I love your story and the way you have portrayed the characters. I especially like how you have Albus as the asshole over-protective bastard. ow tow that Dumbledore can't be all sugary sweet all the time. The man is human after all. I look everyday for updates, please don't stop. Please? *begging*

    ~Coriander
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  • From ANON - msmalcontent on January 28, 2004
    I have truly been enjoying this story enormously. May I juommeomment that I think it would be wrong of you to not update again just because you are unhappy about theber ber of reviews you receive. Anyway I do hope you decide to continue.
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  • From ANON - Agn on January 28, 2004
    Ok so this is going to be difficult for me as I am french and english is not my speciality BUT I do love this story and I would not want for it to be interrupted because the author feels lonely and misunderstood. A lot of angst filled with romance between two of my favourites HP characters is alltaketakes to bright my day so please go on with the story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    There, maybe this is not the most inspired review you will have but it comes from the heart with simple but true words.
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  • From ANON - casi on January 28, 2004
    I LOVE this story. In total there have been 3 stories that have made me cry and this is one of them. This plot is awesome. I really can't believe I haven't found this story earlier. It does seem though at times your taking Snape a bit to far out of charecter. I am seeing him say or think things that are more of your words than snapes. Its not to huge of a deal but I noticed it.

    Also begging for reviews only makes people want to review the story less. I know it helps to ghe she suggestions and what not, but there are more clever ways to get them ;)
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 28, 2004
    First the review...
    He's awake! Yeah. His story was so sad. (Not that I was expecting cute fluffy lambs or something.) I also appreciated her ustanstanding of his past and his life as a teacher. The vicious cycle of mocking from students and his conscequential loathing of them. That he can go beyond that with his feelings for her is really cool.
    Is Hermione going to rip Dumbledore a new one when he returns from London? I really wouldn't expect anything less from her. (grins) She won't tolerate his interference anymore. Not after she has lost so much. She won't lose Severus on top of everything else. RIGHT, RIGHT!!!!

    Second the other stuff... Well, I am trying to think of a decent superhero name. Perhaps "Cannonball" (my maiden name is Cannon) or Hot Mama (could have a groovy 70's costume). I am thinking along the lines of "The Tick" superheroes. Or a "Mystery Men" style heroine. Should it be something darker?
    Glad to help with the potions idea. :-)
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 28, 2004
    You are welcome of course. I have to go and cry again. Chapter 14 - beautiful, communication, tears and ... understanding. What more could a reader ask for, well, maybe another chapter? Thanks, love this story.
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  • From ANON - morgana on January 28, 2004
    i don't like threats, but i do like this story i like the concept and i can only hope that albus gets what's coming to him
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 28, 2004
    Chapter 14... Another FABULOUS chapter my dear!!! Having Severus tell Hermione of his past was very eye-opening & so sad!!! I did like how you added this part to the end of his admissions to lighten up the mood a bit & make way for the next portion that was a bit more light hearted:

    Must check ingredients in pain potion. Seems to slightly, okay- dramatically- reduce inhibitions. May be profitable if one has dark intentions...

    The songs that youse fse for this chapter were PERFECT!!!

    I do so hope that you will be updating again soon as I really want to see how things go between them while Albus is away!!! I want to see if they use this time to its best advantage!!! I want to see iey cey can make plans to be able to ogetogether even after Albus comes back & to see if Minerva will help them!!! Til chapter 15, Deb >^..^
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