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By : PotionsMistressM

From ANON - christabeleve on January 05, 2004
Cry- to shout, weep or wail. I want to shout at Dumbledore to stop being so meddlesome. I want to weep with Hermione at her loss. I want to wail at Snape to go and tell her the truth.
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From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 05, 2004
Don't be scared... it is just me and I am much more mellow now. Don't get me wrong, I am still utterly pissed at Dumbledore. Severus and Hermione are miserable and it is really depressing. Could you stir things up in the next chapter or two? McGonnagall mentioning her nephew was a particularly bitter pill for Hermione.
I do love your story though, even if it bums me out at times. Kudos!
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From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 05, 2004
Chapter 10....... WOW!!! This chapter really got to me for many reasons, you really touched my heart with what you wrote!!! I am still way pissed at Albus because he will not allow what should be between Severus & Hermione & he is tearing them apart inside.... does he even care?!? I do so hope that Severus will find some way to contact Hermione or for her to see him without Albus' knowledge before it is too late!!! Maybe he could get that book to her somehow, it would explain so much to her!!!

The part you wrote about what Hermione was thinking about her mom really touched me!!! Some parts reminded me of my mom & others reminded me of how things are with me & my children!!!

I am really looking forward to what is yet to come formiormione & Severus & am hoping that good things will happen for them very soon!!! I want so much for them to be able to be together, can you tell;-) Til chapter 11, Deb >^..^
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From ANON - GrrArrg on January 05, 2004
Heere ere snake girl, How u doin'?

I love 'Pleasantville' and 'Dude where's my car?' they are two of my faves.
I truly think that one of the best things about this fic is Hermiones memories of her parents, I know I've said this before but they are so real. Actually I just had a vision of mum dressed like Geri Halliwell and now I must go and disinfect my brain!!
I really liked Hermione decorating her rooms and her choice of passwords is definitely something I would have chosen!!

But all this angst is killing me!! Please tell me this is going to end well? Please? Please?

Update soon
Kisses
GrrArrg

P.s Did you watch RHPoT yet?? You don't know what you're missing if you haven't, and no I'm still not tellinu whu what happens next in my story!!
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From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 05, 2004
Chapter 8 & 9............. Albus is being a total DICK!!! What crawled up his backside & died?!? I feel really bad for Hermione & Severus & it pisses me off that Hermione is being lied to by Albus!!! It tugged at my heart when Severus kissed her & spoke to her before he left!!! I can totaly understand that Hermione wanted to be close to Severus after the funeral!!! My mom passed away on Christmas Eve & her funeral was 1 week ago today. I wanted nothing more than to be able to be close to my husband!!! Albus has done a very bad thing in making Severus leave!!! I hope that she finds out the truth & that the 2 of them can throw it all in Albus' face as soon as she is of age & he has no more say!!! Anyway, enough ranting;-) I am really enjoying this story & am looking forward to your next update!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
P.S., Looks like we are neighbors, I live in PA*
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From ANON - XxphoenixX on January 03, 2004
*Still on flo floor after the Sir Mix-a-lot bit*
Bloody hell, woman. I'm not even British but those words seemed to fit. Bloody hell. That has to be one of the best ideas I've ever heard. If I ever feel juvenile enough to play a game of Truth or Dare ever again, I am adapting that Imperio to a fucking fantastic dare. Tragically, I'm fairly certain I know far more about the song "Baby Got Back" than I should, including most of the lyrics. When I said I liked basically all music, I meant it.
Don't worry about the smut scenes, you're doing fine. I've never written it myself, personally. You think you're lacking in experience? Trust me, dearie, you're probably a porn star in comparison to my exploits. I mean that as a good thing. Really.
By the by, must apologize for my strange behaviour in my previous review. Especially all the topic-changing. My doctor says I have A.D.D. but - Oh look! A chicken!
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From ANON - XxphoenixX on January 03, 2004
Hmm. BTW that last review was for chapter 6. This one is for 7. I think I've gotten that right. If not, excuse me, myself and my various split personalities apologize.
No, we don't.
Yes, we do.
Shut up!
No, you shut up!
Can't we all act like adults here?
Some of us aren't adults!
Speak for yourself, kiddo.
Once again, I'm sorry. My doctor says I have multiple personality disorder, but we disag
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Anywho, interesting chapter. Liked the smart people and classical music thing. Sadly, I, as a self-ordained intelligent person, do like classical music. Actually, I like every kind of music. Except country. Well, most country. Some country I don't mind. Um yeah, must stop getting off topic. Damn tangents. And sines. And cosines.
Anyroad, poor Snape. Lof faf family. Whoa. Very much family. Cute thing with the lack of driver's license and the obliviate. Never heard of the Cleveland accent. Sounds interesting...
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From tny1111 on January 02, 2004
Wonderful story! Can't wait to see them end up together. Dumbledore should just butt out!!
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From ANON - GrrArrg on January 02, 2004
Oh WOW!!

Firstly, I am so honoured that you dedicated a chapter to me, especially an emotionally packed timebomb like this one!! I was as you state very hung over and as I have just finished a thirteen hour shift (Yes 7.30am till 8.30pm) this was exactly what I needed so thank you so much, I feel so loved *sob*

Second, the review, I just crowned Shem 'The queen of all things angsty' and she doesn't play well with others (No you don't Shem!) so I can't give you that title but MY GOD woman that was some powerful emotional angsty chapter.
Can I just say to Albus Dumbledore "You can kiss my JLO sized arse!" what a wanker, excuse the language!!
He cannot keep them apart, you cannot allow it MissM!!

Favourite lines included "don't know what my sudden fascination with having Snape for breakfast, I mean, Snape having breakfast was"
and "Oh, bugger it! I'm a Potions Master, not a Charms professor"

I love the way that you can infuse humour and angst into all of your chapters, thats really hard to do!!

Queen of all that is smutty? I definitely don't deserve that title but thanks anyway!! I am not actually from Watford but I do live there now and yes that is where Geri is from. I actually live on the same estate that she grew up in!! I must admit to being a bit of a closet Spice fan myself (closet because of 1) my age and 2) in England the only people who liked them were under the age of nine or teenage boys!!) Geri was always my favourite, she is quite the hottie!! You musical tastes are as strange as mine!!
South park is very big over here. Another thing that I love and my other half hates (He's 13 years older than me so I don't think that he gets a lot of the things I like!!) But I love Cartman, the fat girl inside me that is always fighting for dominance thinks that he is her role model!!
O.K I'm finished with my essay length review now (Fuck off Shem, I can't help it, I ramble, so sue me!!)
Chat soon, yes?
somesome chapter (honoured I say!!)
Big Kisses
GrrArrg
P.s By vampires, does that include Buffy and Angel or am a just a saddo in that department?

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From ANON - Titania on January 02, 2004
Liked the chapter! Your bio is interesting. I too am a semi goth for the same reasons, eventho I am in my mid 30's. I must confess to being a punk rocker in high school as well. I still listen to the music! I love Evanessence as well, Static X etc. Vampires rule and if I can't have Sev (Swoulwould be pissed and I don't mess with dear Shem! She's awesome!) then I will settle for Lestat. (I am actually thinking of writing a story with a vampire wizard)

Anyway, I am rambling. Too little sleep I imagine.

Post the next, please!! Soon!!!

Titania

PS- Since you like vampires, I am going to pimp a WIP. It's called Travels with Severus;Severus does New Orleans. It's here on AFF under Titania. Snape and OFC-Not a Mary Sue (I hope-but no flames thus far)--T
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From ANON - shemhamforash on January 02, 2004
Oh fuck me! whatthefuck??.... Don't you know that the golden rule in SSHG fanfiction is that Dumbledore is suppose to turn a blind eye to Sev and Herms or alternatively push them together on account of him being a doddering old fool who is wacked up on an illicit substance infused into his lemon drops???? GAH!!. Ha. Have to say that is the most reaction I have ever seen Dumbledore have inregards to Sev and Herms 'intimate' relations, and I have to say that it was so true to real life that it was scary...

Am not liking my Sev hurt lady... *narrows eyes*.... please fix your otherwise fine story now... err... well soon... before you make a very powerful enemy.... Lucius is going to be punished tonight because of this.. I think Sev has been through enough... *grin*

Am most pleased that you have ded tod to joi ran ranks.. there are many young Derath Eaters requiring private tutaledge.... err... Crabb and Goyle we may use as target practice for some more interseting spells and hexes if you don't want to babysit them yourself...

Now.. am off to ..errr.. well... bah.. I dunno... will find something, or rather someone to occupy my time with until Sev is feeling better *mental note tto self, Stop lending out Sev so much... he is really in need of a break*

Until next time...

~
she
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From ANON - spaz141 on January 02, 2004
Pardon me while I cry. I think my hejustjust broke, that must be what pure angst is. I have never read Dumbledore written like this before, he was appaulling, she isn't even a student anymore and she's an adult in the wizarding world. Ugh. Thanks for writing.

About me - 37 married three kids (4th on the way), full-time mom, two part-time jobs. Joined the HP world in July 2003 after being disappointed by OofP. HG/SS not my favourite ship, however, the stories are more a plenty and generally waaaay better written. Not a writer but faithfully review every story/chapter I read.
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From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 02, 2004
Oh my God! I am so fucking pissed at Dumbledore. What did he think as das doing? I can understand that she is still a student and sexual relations of any kind should be forbidden between teach and student. But to say that Hermione did not love Severus and that there was no way she ever could was WAY overstepping the bounds. I am so riled up by your chapter. AAARRRGGG!!!!!!!!!!!! Did Dumbledore catch a clue when Hermione went back to her room and cried??? It is obvious in your fic that they desperately need each other. Stupid fucking Dumbledore.
Write more soon. Damn, I am pissed off.

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From ANON - spaz141 on December 30, 2003
Very interesting story. I though your Severus POV smut was well done, you shouldn't have worried. Thanks for writing.
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From ANON - Shemhamforash on December 29, 2003
Shit fuck Shit fuck Shit fuck Shit fuck Shit fuck Shit fuck Shit fuck Shit fuck Shit fuck Shit fuck Shit fuck Shit fuck Shit fuck Shit fuck Shit fuck

Firstly, Am going to kill GrrArrg when I see her... Am most certanly NOT on the the best authors out there.. am just honest and opinionated and I guess the 'imperios' that I cast on her hasn't worn off yet...

Secondly, forgot the little A/N thing... am 24 year old single with 2 parasitic attachments, aged 5 and 3... am fic author, latent satanist and goth.. am one of the owners and admin mistress of Lord and Lady snape... my loyal minions include, MetaMuse, Corazon, GrrArrg, Rilla, Daya, snapesbbwlover, Fervesco... under me, my minions and I plot for world domination of the SS/HG world and keep safe from all others the sanctified body, mind and soul of one Potions Master named Snape and my one ambition in life is to become a Death Eater and sparr one on one with Lucius and his pimp cane (with Sev backing me up... in more ways than one *grin*)...

So.. would say drop me a line, but you have done that already, so instead I say.. keep dropping me lines!.. am always in need for a keeper of the lesser Death Eaters..

*smirk*

~Shem
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