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By : PotionsMistressM
  • From ANON - aphrodeia on December 23, 2003
    I just read your A/N and chuckled.... I might be demented, but I think that Hermione and Snape are pretty well in character. Bossy and snarky. Mmmmm boy! I'm LOVING the story, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on December 23, 2003
    Ummm... did someone ACTUALLY come to a site with the url of "adultfanfiction.net" and complain about SWEARING? Especially the moderate swearing that you're using, keeping it well within the believable realm? Tsk, tsk. Ignore the ignorant, m'lady! Keep going the way you're going - this is an excellent fic and you're dealing with the emotions quite nicely. I've found the characters to be "in character" - i.e. you've kept the essences of each character while placing them in unusual situations - situations which are NOT found in the books, and therefore who can judge that their reactions are out of character? We only get Harry's POV in the books... who knows what Snape's thinking. For all we know, after he gets back to his quarters after a long day, he kicks on some pink bunny slippers ;) - (just kidding, although it's enly Ply POSSIBLE!). Sheesh.

    Anyway, that was a long-winded way to say you're not "uneducated" and keep writing!
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on December 23, 2003
    Great chapter! Loved it - you're doing a great job maintaining the essences of the characters while putting them through some very intense emotional experiences. I eagerly await your next update!!!
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on December 23, 2003
    Right I'm back, and very pissed off!!

    This is an NC17 review, so if you are underage look away now....

    Too much foul language? my answer would be read somewhere else then!!
    Uneducated and American? My answer would be intelligent and American, my favourite people!!
    Out of character characters? It's called Fan FICTION!! and for the record, I think that MissM's characters are very in character!!
    Too much thinking about Snape? Grief's a funny thing and if someones never grieved then they cannot possibly know the crazy things that go through your head!!
    Labled chapter seven as chapter five? Working your arse off seven days a week fourteen hours a day will do that to you!!

    I don't know how much my opinion counts, but in all my correspondance with you, you have seemed like someone who I would very much like as a friend, witty, intelligent, good taste in music and books, and someone who can make me smile across thousands of miles. I look forward to your chapters, emails and reviews, and don't let anyone tell you different!!
    Sorry, had to get that off my chest!!
    Kisses
    GrrArrg

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  • From ANON - Carol on December 23, 2003
    Ok, just ignore the reviewer who has the issue with swearing - they should know how to use the back button if they don't like something. This is a great story, and very well written. Please continue it for readers like me who are enjoying it! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on December 23, 2003
    O.K. First, eleventybillion days is exactly how long I have been at work this week!!

    Second, I am quite sure that you do not have Captain Trips, but to be on the safe side avoid 'The walking dude',he may also call himself Randall Flagg!! (My favourite book ever, Stephen King-Genius!!)

    Third, Review. I actually winced with sympathy for Hermione's insomnia, there truly isn't anything worse than that whole 'blanket on-blanket off, one pillow- two pillows' thing. I am familiar with it and you portrayed it very realistically (and like someone who has experienced it)
    Relatives are a nightmare aren't they?
    I love Hermione's taste in music, which I'm assuming is also yours (You've got me hooked on Damn Evanescence, they are still quite new over here, but I am going to buy their CD after Christmas) Fiona, Tori and Christina all rock!!
    "About two a.m. I heard a yawn. Smooth, Snape. Silencing spells only work one way, you dumbass" LMAO!!
    I absolutely cracked up with laughter over the 'Belladonna' exchnge, brilliantly executed!!
    Snape's bumbled apology was brilliant, things are always easier to say in your head than out loud!!
    Cousin Amy is hidious!!
    I am still completely addicted to this and I love your Hermione so much (your Sev is cool too!!)
    Big supportive kisses
    GrrArrg
    P.s, check below for my rant in reply to your A/N!!




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  • From ANON - Kristi on December 23, 2003
    I just had to write and tell you how much I enjoy this story. I sobbed with Hermione at the loss of her friends, raged at Severus for being an asshole, laughed at both of their inner dialouges (?), and could feel her when she learned of her parent's violenrderrders. I look on AFF every day to see if you have added another chapter reread what is available every time you do. I appreciate the fact that even though you have your own personal life and are currently suffering from the horrible flu that is going around that you still take the time out to write more. In fact, I first read the story when I had the flu myself and it was one of the only things that got thru the misery that is the flu. So just keep on doing exactly what you are and don't mind the idots out there who can't offer constructive critisism, they rest of us are cheering you on.
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  • From ANON - x on December 23, 2003
    Nice fic. Keep up the good work. for for the "hermione wouldn
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 23, 2003
    My Dear I will be reading this story to the end!!!

    I know that I get way too into some of the stories that I read, but I still remember that they are in fact STORIES!!! This is your baby & you need to take it where you know yout itt it to go!!! I have said before that I feel ANY STORY written in fan fiction will be OOC because there is 1 person that has true knowledge of these characters, the rest of us are imagining what they would be like by what little we have to go on!!!

    I admit that I got hopeful that it was an update, but I am glad that you took the time to vent*
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  • From ANON - Katze on December 23, 2003
    Hi! I can't tell you how much I've enjoyed reading this fic. You've done an excellent job portraying Hermione and Snape, and I especially like how Snape can't help being a git despite everything. You've done a great job so far and I can't wait to find out what happens next! (What I really mean to say is, will Hermione kick Malfoy's ass or what?! Heh.)
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  • From ANON - Tanya on December 23, 2003
    Well, it's been a while since I've reviewed, but this fic keeps getting better and better! The hole back and forth thing with Severus and Hermione is cool.... Severus really does need to get his act togther though... LoL... I am looking forward to your next update!
    Tanya~
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  • From ANON - twisted sister on December 23, 2003
    In addition to the above remarks, I must say that your mention of "Idiot Boyfriend" was brilliant.
    ~twisted
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  • From ANON - Twisted Sister on December 23, 2003
    This fic rocks and you rock for writing it! I've laughed, I cried (a lot), and now I want more (please, pretty please with Severus on top)! Honestly, sto story is progressing beautifully and when Hermione and Severus do come together, it will be well worth the wait.

    ~twisted
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 22, 2003
    Chapter 7....... WOW, that poor girl!!! So much to have to wit with & then her feelings for Severus on top of it all!!! I do hope that Sev can get past the tongue tiess ess he has made of himself & just tell her how he really feels (he knows how much he wants her)!!!

    I can only imagine how things are going to go while her extended family is there, frightening!!! I hope that he will make himself more open & available to Hermione during the wake, funeral & after!!! She really does need his support & he wants hers!!!

    I really am enjoying your story & can't wait for more!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - vicki on December 22, 2003
    No I don't think I will hit myself over the head with "The Stand" With the rewrite he did on it I think it would probably kill me.I have heard that about this flu before and it is just a little scary. Any way great chapter hope you feel better.
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