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By : PotionsMistressM

From ANON - Flick on December 22, 2003
Yes, you made me cry, there were a few tears. Well I guess I should say your wonderful fic made me cry. Luved the part with Sev eating the cookies. haha Sev got what he deserved, in Hermiones point of view and then he had to suffer through Amy's ramblings, hehe he didn't have a good chapter did he? I hope you haveexceexcellent Christmas (I'm sure you will seeing as you have that sexy Sev) lol
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From ANON - Lady Anne on December 22, 2003
Well, the only thing I'm disappointed about is that there isn't more. Keep going, it's great!
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From ANON - Flick on December 22, 2003
WoooooHoooo I come back to 3 chapters. YaaaaaY. Thank you. Poooor Hermione, you made me cry. *cries some more* You're updating quickhan han you said :) hope it continues lol plz update soon :D I want to see how Hermione pulls through this one ~ Flick
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From ANON - HERMIONEANDSEVERUS4EVA! on December 21, 2003
i liked this chapter almost as much as the last. it was so touching especially w/the inscription on the photo and how she stayed up all night singing and playing the piano and crying it was all so *sob* sad, my eyes were threatening to spill the whole time. i can only imagine what it would be like to lose my parents, but you did a great job putting the feelings into words, im so sorry about your fathers death u'll be in my mind and my prayers :)
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From ANON - HERMIONEANDSEVERUS4EVA! on December 21, 2003
i thouroughly enjoyed this chapter i loved the passion between mione and severus, then mione's raging, and sev beating himself up about it. i'm sure it would have been very interesting if mione had stormed into sev's office and told him but the ranting in her room was quite hilarious too. i'm sure the graduation ceremony, as well as what happens afterwards, will be quite interesting... great job ur doing, i can't wait to read more :)
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From ANON - GrrArrg on December 17, 2003
Ch 6 The review!!

There are so many things I don't know where to star

"I'd end up working at some terrible retail for for the rest of my life! I'd be twenty years old and managing a Claire's for God's sake!" - I'm right there with ya!!

"I don't have a dad.I don't have a mum"
Snape explaining what had happened was heartbreaking in every way.

Just as i dried my eyes after that, you came up with this: ""Just a bit early to see the Headmaster in leather chaps." - The images of Dumbledore dressed like Christina Aguilera in the 'Dirrty' video will stay with me forever!!

"Jeez, Granger, keep up this inner monologue and you could be a stand-up comic if the whole "witch" thing doesn't pan out" - I bow to your genius, and say 'I'm not worthy'

There were so many more outstanding moments in this chapter but I know you only wanted a review not an essay so I'll stop here!
You are going to be pissed with me anyway, because you think you've got three new reviews, but they're all from me!!
Serves you right for being so brilliant!!
I hope this is going to be a long fic (my favourite kind!) because I just love 'Sev and Hermione from the mind of MissM'
Extra big kisses for this most excellent chapter!!
GrrArrg

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From ANON - GrrArrg on December 17, 2003
Ch 6

How could you do that to Hermione?!?
I'm going to read it again and then I'll review, once I've finished crying and laughing and trying to hex you with a cigarette (think very small wand!)
Back soon
(No kisses for you evil wench!)
Grrarrg
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From ANON - GrrArrg on December 17, 2003
Ch 5
"I have said it before, and I am quite sure I will say it again.
I am a complete and utter fuck-up" - Severus Snape

Pure class, are are you reading my mind, I tell myself this daily!!

Your Hermione is one of my favourites, I love the way she talks and I love the way her mind works, I guess that means I love the way your mind works, As I'm sure that those of us who write HG/SS fics are really just expressing our 'Inner Hermione!!
I have never said this to another writer before and I'm surat tat the hate mail will flooding through my mailbox
But I can't keep up with your speed posting!! I just got the email about ch 5 and look ch 6 is here too!!
I'm not complaining, I'm v.v happy!!
I'm glad to see that you're owning up to calling me evil *sob* You're a bloody fine one to talk!!
I will tell all my friends to have a read and have put you at the top of my recommended fics will that do!!
Ah Gemini, split personality huh!! Never mind I love you anyway!!

Don't worry about the reviews, I think it's good manners to review if you've read and enjoyed a story. The writer has obviously sweated over it and will be anxious to see if people liked it, but some lurkers just don't see that, I don't think that you can appriciate it unless you have posted a fic (God I've turned into a fanfic snob!!)
That said I am off to read chapter six now and then I will review again, coz I'm good like that!!
Kisses
GrrArrg

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From ANON - star no star on December 17, 2003
oh man. sorry it took so long to review your two new chapters. i got to preview return of the king 2 days before it came to theatres and i've been very tired. these two chapters took a turn, like plot wise. i've no idea where it'sdingding to. i kinda like it, but i'd kinda like snape alittle darker and hermione a bit more depressed but soft spoken.. i dunno. it's your story and i like it so keep writing and w0000 with the fart jokes!

p.s. abe is very em-bare-assed :P
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From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 17, 2003
!st off, THANK YOU for the compliment as well as for adding another chapter tonight!!!

Chapter 6............. POOR Hermione!!! She has been at the crap end of the stick way more than she deserves!!! There is one thing to be said for her though, she is STRONG!!! There is a saying that reminds me of this so much: That which does not kill us can only prove to make us stronger.

I really appreciate Severus' character here, the man does have a heart, that can not be denied!!! He cares for her so much & is once again in a position to allow her to enter into his life.... let's hope he doesn't blow it again!!! They really do need each other, even more than they want each other!!!

I do so hope that you will be able to add chapter 7 soon (I doI don't expect it as quickly as you added this one)!!! Til then, Deb >^..^
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From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 17, 2003
Oh my god! Please don't kill anyone else off. There basically isn't anyone left. Except for Snape, McGonnagal and Dumbledore.
Poor Hermione. SOB!!!
Keep writing!
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From ANON - Michelle on December 16, 2003
Wow! What a quick update! Absolutely marvelous story! I couldn't help but laugh when you talked about Snape, dating, women, and his "nod." I actually laughed out loud. I'm quite happy to see that you haven't sullied the Snape I love - "Snape-the-Bastard." He is still very much in character. Or at least how I would imagine him to be. I look foward to reading more!
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From ANON - Talene on December 16, 2003
Hey...still here and still reading! I love it.....so heart wrenching! Update soon?
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From ANON - XxphoenixX on December 16, 2003
Mm. Sorry for lack of reviewing. Insomnia. Want sleep. Need sleep. Have not slept in three days. So tired.
What was I doing again? Oh yes, reviewing.
Loved Snape in this chapter. The "God, I SUCK" line was fucking brilliant. Not to mention the various "I will not jack off to a student"s. Even in my exhausted state I was cracking up at that.
I've reviewed like a good little girl, 'aven't I? Can I go to sleep now?
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From ANON - GrrArrg on December 15, 2003
Hell yeah!!
Oh sorry, not supposed to cheer for myself am I *smirks*

That was another excellent chapter, I love Severus's inner argument, but honestly, sometimes I just want to shake some sense into him!!

If you are a dork for watching WWE (my dad and my brother both love it and they are 58 and 25 respectively!) then I am a dork for lovibg Buffy and Angel!

I do think we are quite alike, from what I know about you so far, which is not much admittedly! Maybe we should hook up for a chat sometime? You can give me hints about where your story is going and I will tell you nothing!!Ha!! just kidding mate!!

My star sign is Leo, you know, loud, bossy, opinionated, likes to be the centre of attention, yep that about sums me up!!

I am really loving this story
Keep it up
Kisses
GrrArrg

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