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By : PotionsMistressM
  • From ANON - star no star on December 15, 2003
    yeah, i knew you were joking about the fart chapter. however.. i kinda wasn't joking about defacing that blank note... :S Anywayz, this chapter was intense. And stuff... ya... hasta!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 15, 2003
    Chapter 4.......... THAT MAN!!! She made the effort & he really does want her, so what the hell is his problem? For once can't he just accept that he can be loved, that his past is just that & that he can be cared for? Can't he pull his head out long enough to see what's right in front of his face? He just infuriates me!!! Can we say that Deb can get a little too into a story!!!;-)

    Can't wait to see what happens in chapter 5 & I really am hoping that he can get his head far enough out to accept what he needs & give her what she deserves..... in other words I hope that they can be TOGETHER in every sense of the word!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 15, 2003
    No, no, no, no... why is he always pushing her away? Dork!
    Well, are you going to have her meet up with him again in the future? It doesn't look very hopeful right now. Unless she realizes his abuse is a defense mechanism.
    Write more soon please.
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  • From ANON - shiv5468 on December 14, 2003
    Very angsty. I like it though. You can see how both of them would be badly wounded by the past. Dare I hope that there will be a happy ending. I do like a happy ending. ng ang a sad ending puts me in a foul mood for the rest of my day and my colleagues at work won't be happy.
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on December 13, 2003
    Now THAT'S what I'm talking about!!
    You tell him Hermione, that fucking prick!!
    OMG, You just made me call the subject of my fantasies a prick!!
    Damn you're good, I absolutely loved this chapter,
    and you know how I like my Hermione with a bit of fire in her!!
    By the way, just in case you didn't know, I am the queen of the exclamation mark!!
    See!! I've nearly worn the button out on my keyboard, I use it that often!!
    It's to substitute for the fact that you can't see or hear me, I am very expressive when I talk,
    Very loud and arm wavey (a bit of a freak/ drama queen really)
    I'm ready for more as soon as you are, let me know.
    Kisses
    GrrArrg
    P.s You know where I am, if you want me for anything
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  • From ANON - XxphoenixX on December 12, 2003
    Another wonderful chapter, darling. Sorry about all of your family as well! A few grammatical/spelling errors, though. "All you ever do is deman or belittle us, but you are through intimisating me!" Yeah... I think what's wrong is pretty obvious. There were a few other mistakes as well, no offense, of course. Do you have a beta?
    Anyway, the plot is coming along nicely. Hermione PMS-ing and the getting into the revised H: AH was hilarious. I am somewhat disappointed that so much time passed so quickly. Gradution already? Snape pining and brooding is great fun. Keep updating!
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on December 12, 2003
    Another great chapter! Wonder how Sev will react when Hermione passes her Potions NEWT even w/o his class? Update as soon as you can... Ihopihoping he can convince her to listen sometime.... And on the reviews - don't get discouraged... a lot of people just don't review for some reason. I've got over 2000 hits on my most recent story and 49 amazingly positive reviews, I'm sure if those other people didn't like it at least ONE of them would've let me know by now :).
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  • From ANON - star no star on December 12, 2003
    YAY! Fart jokes! Oh god... I know I shouldn't be saying this here at all, but I wrote my dad a poem today about farting and left it on the desktop of his computer. It was really stupid. Then I took a $5 and made it so Lincoln is say"ex"excuse me..." and off to the side it says 'fart'... god I was a moron today! Anywayz, awesome chapter. You didn't disoppoint me in the least bit, Potions Mistress M. By the way.. I too have a facination with the Potions Master... :S See ya later, alligator.
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  • From ANON - HERMIONEANDSEVERUS4EVA! on December 12, 2003
    omg.....*sigh* i read ur story and i just sat there like ............with tears welling up in my eyes. when he said they're all dead, i just couldn't stand it and then how they both love each other so much but they push each other away in their grief and and..when severus held her inhis arms and she cried *awwwww* *sniff* i am infatuated (great word) with this story, please email me when u add more :) ur story is "bloody brilliant!"
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 12, 2003
    Well... fuck. Severus is fucked up. Hermione is fucking mad. Perhaps Hermione could kick a Slytherin's ass? A student perhaps. (Little bit of the old bloodlust.)
    Are they going to calm down and talk to each other in the next chapter? Severus will have to go first. I can't see Hermione approaching him.
    Keep writing.

    (It is a real bummer that practically everyone is dead in your fic.)
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  • From ANON - Flick on December 12, 2003
    A week, hee hee I can wait a week. I'm going away for a week so when I come back I'll pray there is a new chapter. This chapter was awesome. Poor Sev and Hermione too. Trust Sev to take it out on Hermione. Will she ever forgive him? And what's going to happen now cause Hermione uateuates like tomorrow hee hee. Have fun writing and I'll be hanging out for the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - summer on December 11, 2003
    Wow! I cant wait to see where this is going. I just love dark fic's, and with the amount of death in the first chapter, this is definatly on the dark side. I also like that you have got 2 POV's going. It makes it very interesting. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 11, 2003
    I just finished reading chapters 1 & 2, this is one hell of a story!!!

    I am one that is of the mind that most any fan fic is in a sense OOC to a degree because there is really only 1 person that really knows who these charachters are, J.K. herself. I think that most of the time a writer tries to stay as true to their perception of who these people are, how they would act, etc., but in the end rt ort of the writer has worked its way into the charachter.

    I think the setting that you have placed them in has altered how they would act to a great degree, dealing with so much pain & loss, they are human after all. I feel that the Severus you write in this story is very believable because he is a man of feelings that, even if only to himself, he admits to have. He loves, cares, hurts, feels anger & desire, plus so many more emotions that have been kept in check, but are now begining to come to the surface more.

    I do hope that you will be able to update this story again soon as I am really anxious to seere ere it goes!!! Til chapter 3, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Bree on December 11, 2003
    OMG! I love this story! It's really well written, and I'm already completelotiootionally involved with it. I cannot wait for more!!! Please update!
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  • From ANON - Talene on December 10, 2003
    As my memory is abysmal, I cannot say that I reviewed before but I thought I did. Although very angsty......I love it. I don't normally go in for this sort of thing but.....I really, REALLY like this story. Update soon?
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