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By : NiniGrl
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 12, 2004
    Chapter 6........ This just keeps getting better & better!!! I really can't wait tad tad the continuation of the conversation between Severus & Hermione now that she told him that she loved him!!! I am curious to see what he will say after that!!!

    The situation between Draco & Ron sounds like it could prove to be quite interesting!!! I really didn't see it coming!!! What will happen next, will Ron make the next move, will Draco? Can't wait to find out!!!

    I am hoping that Devlin will be allowed to know who his father is soon, he deserves that much & more!!!

    Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on January 12, 2004
    i can see clearly now... that was very informative that chapter. see, i'm just slow. lol. need help with the uptake. but that snape, did he use veritaseum (sp?) on hermione? tsk tsk tsk. always a slytherin eh. what a shocker at the end. who knew that ron and draco's animosity was all derived from sexual tension? lol. good twist, althought slightly disturbing too. anyway, i look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Imp on January 12, 2004
    More please.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 12, 2004
    I'm usually pretty clueless, so I actually impressed myself by not being confused by the parentage of Devlin. Littlosseossed out by Ron and Draco (but that's my problem, not critizing). Interesting plot, thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 05, 2004
    Just finished chapters 4 & 5........ HOLY CRAP!!! I must say that I am a bit pissed at Albus, the man always thinks he's doing the right thing, but in the end has he really?!? You really had me going there for a bit, I was believing that Lucius was Dev's father.... so very glad that he's not!!! I think Hermione really caught Sev by surprise!!! How will he feel now that he knows he has missed out on his son's life??? I am really looking forward to finding out more about Sev & Hermione's past relationship & seeing how he deals with the fact that he is a father!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 05, 2004
    Okay, I'm *really* confused now. I hope how Snape could possibly be Devlin's father is explained reasonably soon. From what you've written so far, Lucius was the only . . . um . . .candidate.

    Other than that, I've been enjoying this story quite a bit. : ) I look forward to seeing more.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Gwennavierre on January 05, 2004
    I am very confused about the whole potionng mng meaning that Severus is indeed the father of Devlin, but I know without a doubt you'll clear up my confusion with your superb writing skills!!! It could just be that I am very tired...in any case, I eagerly look forward to the next chapter (I'll check every few minutes).

    Hurry please?

    ::checks again::

    Damn.

    Hugs,

    Gwen
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 05, 2004
    I'm shaking...what an intriguing story. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on January 04, 2004
    'after morning' potion? is that what that is? very nice. lol. i am a bit lost though, probably nothing a reread won't cure, but let me get the question out of the way. why does severus think he's not the father? dev looks like severus, talks, acts like him. isn't the saying, 'if it looks like a duck, quacks like a duck, walks like a duck, isn't it a duck?' i'm guessing from her recent memories that lucius did indeed rape her, so does that mean severus didn't? see i'm all confused. don't mind me i'm just really really slow. it is a good story and hopefully the next chapter will be up soon. hint hint hint.
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  • From ANON - Zephyr on January 04, 2004
    Great story so far.. I am really enjoying it.. and BTW vile should be vial. Damn homophones anyway.. smile....
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  • From ANON - Starwind on January 04, 2004
    Oh man!! I so did not see that coming at the end! This fic is getting better and better by the chapter. You HAVE to update soon. Pleeeease!
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  • From ANON - Susan on January 04, 2004
    Thank you so much for updating. I love this story. Am anxious to read how Severus became Devlin's father.
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  • From on December 31, 2003
    Great start to what seems is going to be a wonderful story. I'm excited about this story and have recommended it to many of my fellow WIKTTeers so don't let us down! I'm REALLY looking forward to you updates! Good Luck!
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on December 29, 2003
    wow. this is an excellently well written story. the details are mesmerizing and the characterization is deep. the plot is believable if a bit subtle right now. i have no idea where the story will go. and it seems you've thrown in a bit of mystery. is snape really the father of devlin or is it lucius? who knows, it might even be someone else. poor dumbledore though. it's hard to imagine him ever dying but he is extremely old and the time does come when time catches up with you. i eagerly anticipate more.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on December 29, 2003
    Thanks for the update.
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