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Reviews for When It Rains

By : NiniGrl
  • From voraciousreader on September 17, 2008
    It's a pity you never finished this; it had real possibilities. Good character aging as well! ah, well.
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  • From ANON - June W on June 21, 2006
    Update, please?
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  • From ANON - June on January 28, 2006
    Six months.... update please?? Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - June on August 16, 2005
    Ch 5 - YAY, A NEW CHAPTER!!!!!! I can't believe I almost missed this. It's great! I hope Severus and Devlin have a wonderful relationship, better than with Ron or Harry or Draco. The prophecy - even without Voldemort, there's always a dark lord somewhere, so Devlin needs to be trained in defense, and that's where Severus could come in handy. Where's the next chapter????? Thank you for updating!
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  • From ANON - ladydeathfearie on July 08, 2005
    now there is an interesting plot line.

    i find myself intrigued and now looking
    forward to more. i do hope there will be
    another chapter soon. i'm rather the
    impatient sort and.... and.... and....

    don't make me come over there! ~giggles~

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - S.Sears on July 08, 2005
    this story is awesome can't wait to read more.





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  • From ANON - Davina Icaras on May 15, 2005
    Hi, I like you're story but when are you going to continue?
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on September 18, 2004
    I am being honest here, I have no critism of your ability to tell a story. You have talent. I, however, preferred the
    original version. In my own opinion this has now become just another Severus/Hermione rape fic. I am disappointed,
    but it is your story and you need to go where your muse takes you. As for Draco/Ron I found it highly implausible
    but it did not bother me one bit. Remember this is your story, in all the writing courses I have ever taken the
    mantra is write for yourself, not other people. Sure reviews are important, as one author put it, its like a form
    of payment for all your hard work, however, ultimately you need to be pleased with your end product.

    I wish you the best of luck with your new ion ion of the story. I welcome the opportunity to read any future stories
    you may write. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - tarotgoddess9 on September 17, 2004
    Ir onr one, fully approved of where the Draco/Ron relationship was going. Not because I'm weird, but because there really is something very emotional between the two of them, and if the same emotions can spawn a relationship in a heterosexual couple, it most certainly can in a homosexualeep eep up the good work.
    p.s. I really liked the old story, too!
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  • From ANON - June on September 16, 2004
    Ch 4 - great chapter, lots of information and details! Ahem ... may I assume you will be updating on a more frequent basis? It's a good story, I'd really like to see more if it! Thank you.
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  • From ANON - June on September 16, 2004
    Ch 3 - re Draco and Ron - how about a three-way friendship between Draco, Ron, and Harry? Maybe make them a sort of "new golden trio" with SS, HG, and Devlin becoming their own "golden trio."
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  • From ANON - jo on July 22, 2004
    Interesting idea and very well written. Can I see more please?

    -jo
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  • From ANON - BonnieLass on March 25, 2004
    THis is so adorable! Well, atleast most of this chapter was... Anyway, this is a great story. I love the Draco/Ron biplay. Keep up the great work, and I can't wait to read more, especially if Hermoine gets revenge on Lucius. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Rio on March 11, 2004
    Dude, that was EVIL!!! Leaving off on a cliffhanger like that... Anyway, awesome chapter and I hope to see an update soon.
    ~Rio~
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  • From ANON - Rio on March 11, 2004
    Dude, that was EVIL!!! Leaving off on a cliffhanger like that... Anyway, awesome chapter and I hope to see an update soon
    ~Rio~
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