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Reviews for The Ties that Lead to Trust

By : GoldenFeather
  • From ANON - luffmuffin on June 14, 2013
    This was really well written. I do have a question, why did Fudge want Hermione out of the way? Thank you for writing such a great story.
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  • From LadyFreak on February 29, 2012
    definitely one of the best SS/HG marriage law fics around. Enjoyed your telling very much. SS was slightly OOC... only as far as we know. I thought you did a fantastic job writing dialog for him. Thank you for sharing!
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  • From vonHardenberg on November 07, 2010
    This is an exceptional turn of phrase.
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  • From vonHardenberg on November 02, 2010
    I don't like to correct people in open review. Please e-mail me for some suggestions. Your writing is very good. I am sorry that you haven't written more. Maybe DH Pt1 will motivate you to continue.

    Respectfully.
    von Hardenberg
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  • From TheLadyMiya on November 02, 2008
    I really enjoyed this story and I have been reading it when I have had the time during this week. It was very fun and logical, in the sense of everything lead to something. Marriage laws fics are very funny, and I think this was one of the better ones. I'm glad they fell in love! Even if I kind of knew it would happen, it's always nice to read about people in love :D
    So thank you for entertaning me for this last couple of days!
    Take care!
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  • From Persevero on September 08, 2008
    I've just discovered this MLC-and-beyond. I was amazed when I noticed the long period over which it had been written. Lovely - thank you for persisting!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 24, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From gwenivere73 on July 01, 2007
    Loved your story. I can't wait to read more of your work.
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  • From kitlucky13 on May 24, 2007
    I love this story! I was especially pleased and surprised to find--just now--that you'd given Severus the same birthday as myself :) It was amusing to say the least.
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  • From amsev on May 12, 2007
    This is such an excellent story! I hope you are posting to other archives as well!
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  • From Citten on May 10, 2007
    it seem sad to let it end. this was a great and fun story and i truly enjoyed every moment of it! i do hope that you will write a sequel but even if you dont...well i will live. :) until the next time!
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  • From Amethystique on May 10, 2007
    This literary masterpiece has completely 'ensnared my senses'. The gently developing relationship, the dependancy they have for each other, the pain, the emotion, the love and the laughter mixed with the tears have given me a thoroughly wonderful afternoons escapism. I've laughed at the imagery, I've wept at the sorrow and hardship you've given to your characters. There are not enough superlatives to lavish on this fic. Can I be really cheeky though? How about a sequel? You know, maybe a couple of years after she gains her masters? Maybe with the introduction of a 'little' Snapelet? *flutters eyelashes innocently*
    Blessings to you and chocolate cookies for your muse!
    Amethystique x
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  • From DarqueHart on May 10, 2007
    Congratulations on completing your story!! And many thanks for completing it, too! As a person who loves to read the SS/HG ship, it is rather disheartening when many well written, entertaining stories are abandoned by their authors. From now on people who read your story will read it with delight through to the end rather than be disappointed that it was good, but incomplete. Love the Marriage Law stories, loved your version of it.
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  • From sbrande on February 25, 2007
    Great job. I loved ever minute of this wonderful fic. Sonia :)
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  • From DarqueHart on February 24, 2007
    Thank You so much for coming back to this story. Once I reread ch 42 I recalled that it had been a favorite and wondered why it had gone unfinished, as unfortunately so many good stories do. I'll look forward to reading the Epilogue.
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