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Reviews for The Ties that Lead to Trust

By : GoldenFeather
  • From ANON - Wren on April 21, 2004
    Oh no cliffhanger. Update soon. Its great :D
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  • From ANON - Hawklaw on April 21, 2004
    Ooh...nasty cliffhanger! I love how Hermione is becoming a magnet for relationship advice.
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  • From ANON - droxy on April 20, 2004
    Chapter 31 is very good. I am really enjoying this sweet romance and watching SS and HG struggle with normal couple related life issues. Severus is so typically a guy by forgetting the contraceptive, of course we all know why...

    I didn't find the real-estate agent to be obnoxious.

    The chapter has good dialog, pacing, imagery, and timing.

    Of course the icing on this cake of a story is the kissing. Thank you for the nice kiss at the end of this chapter surrounded by the imagery of the home site. I swear I am addicted to this story for the kissing alone.



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  • From ANON - midnight Tiger on April 19, 2004
    perfectly wonderful update and im really loving the house and harry and gin's little tryst in the RoR. :) thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - Bambu on April 19, 2004
    I've just opened your story today -- I can't believe I've missed it all this time. In making up I've read all 31 chapters in one sitting, and thoroughly enjoyed it. Your Hermione is very much a milennium woman and your Severus is quite layered. It has been very nice to see the approaching their relationship from stranger to nodding acquaintance to friends to more. A lovely progression you've charted.
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  • From ANON - buttercup on April 19, 2004
    House hunting, everyone's favorite springtime sport. Very nicely written chapter. Got a gigglen Hen Hermione caught Harry and Ginny in the act. Loved Harry's comment. Keep the chapters coming.

    (btw: I did a little rewrite and worked in the feathers just for you. Look for me to post tomorrow.)
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on April 18, 2004
    Glad to see the update. Great story. Glad they found a house. Looking forward to more soon.
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  • From ANON - Michelle on April 18, 2004
    I always love it when you update!! Such a great story.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 18, 2004
    Chapter 31... Things seem to really be falling into place now, her apprenticeship, a house, their relationship, all seems to be going very well!!! I look forward to seeing what they do with the house as well as finding out how much of a pain her new mentor will be;-) Til chapter 32, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Hawklaw on April 18, 2004
    Words cannot convey how much I love this story. Your writing ability is superb, your characterization extraordinary, and your creativity amazing. It makes my day every time I see a new chaper. Please keep writing this marvelous story.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on April 18, 2004
    *smile* nice chapter, reads like a nice house too. Still my favourite, thanks for updating.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on April 18, 2004
    Wow, I'm so glad you updated this. Their potential house sounds great, even though it seems to need a lot of work, but hey like Severus said, "that's what wands are for.
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  • From ANON - excessivelyperky on April 14, 2004
    A yummy, lemony chapter--and how wonderful that Hermione trusts Severus enough that she doesn't always _have_ to be controlled. Same for him, too. And the way he reassures her--sigh, how lovely! Glad to see you back. Now, you get some rest there, too, even if it takes a bit longer for the next chapter, all right?
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  • From ANON - buttercup on April 13, 2004
    Oh, that was nice. You write the most delicious lemons...sweet and tangy. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 13, 2004
    Chapter 30... Glad to see you're back, I've missed this sto! I! I am very much enjoying how their relationship has grown!!! They are still showing that it is somewhat new whaile at the same time are becoming more comfortable with each other!!! I really like how you wrote Severus in this chapter!!! He is the supportive husband while also being the teacher that leads her to see thinrom rom a different perspective!!! I also very much enjoy the way you write their sharing of each other as well!!! I think you have done a WONDERFUL job of creating their relationship!!! As always I will be looking forward to your next update!!! Til chapter 31, Deb >^..^
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