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Reviews for The Ties that Lead to Trust

By : GoldenFeather
  • From abra on February 02, 2004
    Home is where the heart is
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  • From ANON - Gabriele on February 01, 2004
    Lovely story. I like the way they started to like each other until the moment when they both realized that they love each other. I also like father Grangers reaction and the kiss on Severus cheek by Hermiones Gmothmother.
    Just one question: was this real Latin? My Latin is rather rusted and its 25 years ago that I had to learn and write Latin, but the incatation did not sound very much Latin (at least for my ears) - but this also could be a mistake from me.
    To sum up: lovely, romantic, wonderful story, which I put in an own folder as it is rather voluminious.
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  • From ANON - Midnight Tiger on February 01, 2004
    Oh god my heart is still racing! i loved it! you ended out the scene with her mom well and the part about her hair being charmed was shocking! i cant wait to see how she resolved it with her parrents. or does Sevi resolve it? and oh, the confession, and the love making....so sweet, and wonderful and intense! i like that you had her cut her hair, and i just really really have no words to describe this...your story is so intense!
    thank you for posting!
    H.S.
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  • From ANON - sakhara291 on January 31, 2004
    Can I cry? Is that allowed?
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 31, 2004
    Chapter 23... BEAUTIFUL!!! The way that they shared each other was ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!

    I really like the hair charm, very original to me!!! I also like the situation with Hermione's mother & Severus at least being cordial!!! I'm sur her father will come around eventually!!!

    Glad that her grandmother was able to go home & am hoping that her memories will be returned to her soon!!!

    Til chapter 24, Deb >^..^<


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  • From ANON - Michelle on January 31, 2004
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
    ww.

    That's all I can think after that one. :)
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  • From ANON - Texas Peach on January 31, 2004
    This is such a great story. I loved the last chapter. Please write more. I can hardly wait!

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  • From ANON - Beatrice on January 31, 2004
    She had a woollen jumper on with only a bra beneath? Itch!
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 31, 2004
    ::sighs theatrically:: As severus said, "I have no words." Very well done!!


    kiri
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  • From ANON - Nataly Ravenlock on January 30, 2004
    I found this fic off of WIKTT and have enjoyed it immensely so far. I usually would have reviewed at the end of what is posted, but now seemed like a good time for that. The thing that caught me was Severus's birthday, March 13, which also happens to be my birthday. It took me about three times reading the date over to figure it out and that is when I decided to review. So on with the review...
    You have an absolutely amazing story! The characters are nearly perfectly in character. Snape is absolutely wonderful! I have seen some people portray completely out of wack in a few of the marriage law fics, but you have him nailed down perfectly. Hermione is just as equally well done. I really enjoyed the whole section you did after they had consumated the marriage. The emotions were incredibly realistic. I understood exactly how she felt and it was very similar to what I had felt after loosing my virginity just after my 17th birthday. For me both parties were completely willing and are still highly devoted to each other. You had the denial part perfect and that you just feel different. I remember spending at least a week if not longer trying to accept the fact that I was no longer a virgin. I really appreciate that someone got it right. Thanks for being the one to do that. I also liked the gentleness of the emotions that you have in this fic. Its completely unrushed and you can feel them falling in love. The pacing is perfect for youyle.yle. Its nice and slow and doesn't rush into everythign too fast. Out of all the fics that I have read dealing with this challenge, yours is by far one of my favorites. Awesome job!
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  • From ANON - sakhara291 on January 30, 2004
    All I can tell you is that I'm still waiting for the scene when Hermione has to explain all this.
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  • From ANON - Slytherin Secret on January 29, 2004
    This is great, well written, descriptive and the narrative develpoment is moving along well (not to mention all the lovely lemony bits!). Please update soon as I'd love to read more.
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  • From ANON - Slytherin Secret on January 28, 2004
    I was just going to review all of this when I finish reading it but I had to say that I LOVED that ritual fo Ron. It was so emotional and well thought out. Well done. Off I go to the next Chapter.
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  • From ANON - Redone on January 28, 2004
    Very very very very very good! I'm so hooked.
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  • From ANON - Midnight tiger on January 28, 2004
    wonderful wonderful! i love id cad cant wait for more! sorry that this is going to be short, i broke my glasses right around chapter 19. LOL cant see! the ending bit was so tender and sweet. i cant wait to see Greg's reaction and i hope lucious gets stuck in the end. ::hugs:: thank you so much for posting.
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