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Reviews for The Ties that Lead to Trust

By : GoldenFeather
  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 24, 2004
    ooooo! The inlaws! LOLOLOL Can't wait.

    Oh, and I have to agree with Snape, the timing of the accident is just a little *too* convenient to be truly an accident. I suppose only time will tell -- well, and you, when you deem it the right time. : )


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - buttercup on January 24, 2004
    I'm always so happy to see that you've updated. I STILL love this story. I like it more and more with every new chapter. From the looks of your hits, I'm not the only one! Great chapter!

    ~buttercup
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  • From ANON - caliko on January 24, 2004
    uh.. something tells me this isn't g to to be pretty.... good chapter, btw.. i love this story. Waiting for the next, as patient as only a cat can be... ^_^ ~Caliko
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 24, 2004
    Thanks for updating even though this is a shorter chapter than usual. Glad to see SS is in protection mode. However, teh are the parents going tobe worse than Malfoy? LOL

    I think I know how Malfoy is doing his surveillance but I won't spoil it here.
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  • From ANON - Gabriele on January 24, 2004
    Want to tell you what wonderful and lovely story you wrote. Its truely heart-warming and very very romantic without being too sweet.
    Not a too quick development for Severus and Hermione but rather slowely and gentle. And now they are together!
    I hope the Malfoy
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  • From ANON - snailexpress on January 22, 2004
    Erp! It's beautiful, but I wish there was more!

    Honestly, you've done just a beautiful job of bringing these two together. Though, I'm currently terribly distracted by what that Christmas card was all about...
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  • From ANON - Cass the Heartnut on January 22, 2004
    Very nice story! I am really enjoying reading this sweet story, even through SS seems very OOC compared to other fanfics, but since we don't know much about him besides what is written in the novels, I think you're doing just fine. I'd like to think there's a sweet guy under all that nasty stuff that comes to the fore when Harry's around. Very innocent and special story- just what I was hoping to find. There's something special about people learning together, and you've captured that very well.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 22, 2004
    I have decided, even though its not finished, this is my favourite story for the challenge. Now where do I go to vote, is there even voting? This story is the winner in my mind. Thanks so much.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 21, 2004
    The note from home sounds ominous, somehow -- but that could just be my paranoid nature. lol

    A truly heartwarming chapter, and a joy to read.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 21, 2004
    I really love thiset ret romatic fic. hermione is a lucky gal. LOL

    But this chapter leaves me with a sense of forboding...I hope Sev's death eater instincts kick on this.

    Although I hope there is more angst to go reinforce the sweetness. I can't wait to see those Malfoy bastards and watch Sev hex the the liviging daylights out of him.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 21, 2004
    Chapter 19.... I do so love these 2 together & it is even better that they have gotten closer over the holiday break!!! Making new traditions, sharing each other, what a WONDERFUL Christmas for them!!! I am so glad that she wants to stay with him now & I'd say that it won't be long before she will know that the time is right to tell him that she loves him!!!

    I am very curious abou the card from her parents?!? I am hoping that they just miss her, but I have a feeling that there's a lot more to it than that!!!

    Til chapter 20, Deb >^..^
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  • From GoldenFeather on January 21, 2004
    Hello all you wonderful people! I know the updates are coming a bit slower now, but... the real world has caught up with me I'm afraid and I don't have as much time as before. I don't want to compromise on quality so I'll likely be updating twice a week or so. WOW! Chapter 19... I'm sitting on 90 pages of written work using tiny font in my WP and almost 17,000 hits! Thank you to everyone who is reading (and hopefully enjoying) I'm having a great deal of fun. Big hugs to everyone who reviews. I hope you enjoyed the lemons. I'm afraid you may have to wait a little bit for another as the end of the last chapter indicates a smidge of plot development about to happen. To anyone worried... I am not the grim reaper.... that's all I'll say... Happy reading everyone!
    Da Feather
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  • From ANON - Heather on January 21, 2004
    Uh Oh! I wonder what's up. I am really enjoying the way these two have decided to get to know each other over the holiday. I love my kids dearly, and Christmas isn't really Christmas until you see your babies' faces light up in the morning, but I miss those cozy, no-obligations to anyont eat each other type Christmases.

    *drinking a cup of hot chocolate while reading*

    Thanks for the warm and fuzzies!
    Heather
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  • From ANON - Mel on January 20, 2004
    MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!!

    You have taken a very "outdated" concept (forced or arranged marriages) and painted a very contemporary picture of it; furthermore, you have developed the plot and the characters very plausibly, making the entire situation seem genuine. What stands out especially is the amount of ambivalence and timidity that both Hermione and Snape are experiencing as they make the best of a bad show.
    I imagine that what they are going through is quite similar to what people of centuries past endured as they entered into their arranged marriages. Well done, a truly fine piece of work.

    NOW HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!! :)
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  • From ANON - iloveron on January 20, 2004
    i love this story,write the nxt chapie soon please
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