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Reviews for The Ties that Lead to Trust

By : GoldenFeather
  • From ANON - crissy on January 13, 2004
    they are so romantic! so abosolutely cute! i hope you post more soon.

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  • From ANON - Stellar Snape on January 13, 2004
    This story is fabulous so far! I'm sorry I didn't review each individual chapter, but I couldn't stop once I started. I feel quite lost now that there aren't anymore chapters loaded. :o) You definitely pulled me right in.

    My only complaint is that you are spelling Professor Flitwick's name incorrectly. In each of your chapters you are putting his name as "FLINTWICK" not 'Flitwick.' Just a little thing, but it was bothering me.

    In any case, the story is absolutely wonderful and I look forward to more immensely! Please post to WIKTT when you update.
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  • From ANON - Nocturnus on January 13, 2004
    Been 3:15 AM in a week day, I must be sleeping (A working mum should take care of her sleeping habits) but I need to tell you how much I love your story. Is consistent, with a good atmosphere, well shapped charachters and interesting dialogues. With a propoer pace, the plot is developing in the right direction.

    I just can
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  • From ANON - Gwennavierre on January 12, 2004
    Wonderful story!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. You have Hermione down very well and the way she acts after the...um... "first time"...is very good. I think any young and innocent girl would act like that. Please hurry and update. I like cuddly Sev and want to read more!!! :-D

    Hugs,

    Gwen
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  • From ANON - Amathya on January 12, 2004
    This is a lovely story. I'm greatly enjoying the characterizations of Hermione and Severus, as well as the secondary characters. I suppose what strikes a chord with me the most are the situaitons and shared dialogue between Severus and Hermione. I've only just begun a relationship myself ... my first in fact, and the way you've written the progression and the shyness, as well as the growing understanding and mutual friendship they share, creates a mosaic of tender emotios - in this sense, it feels real to me. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - edgeworlds on January 12, 2004
    *Sighhhhhhh* Oh, now that's just tooo sweet. I love the way how you've portrayed their feelings in such a delicate, toned down manner, definitely realistic and all the more endearing. Sometimes the best relationships are the ones that develop the slowest, and certainly the most unexpected way. Kinda reminds me of my first fling :D This is a rehinghing perspective amid all the "Marriage" fics out there, and you've definitely got me hooked. Thank you for the wonderful story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - WizardingAngel on January 12, 2004
    another wonderful chapter and s ges getting hoter by the minuet.............Wonder wha they are going to be doing over the holidays............as always keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 12, 2004
    I'm all a flutter, thanks.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 11, 2004
    Chapter 16..... I really like the way you wrote this chapter!!! I think the way you had them get closer over time made it very believeable, innocent & honest!!! I think this was the only way to open the doors to a more phyl rel relationship between them!!! WELL DONE!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^
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  • From Deblovesdragon on January 11, 2004
    Oh my god, that was so sweet. I can't wait til their Christmas holiday together. Write more soon please.

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  • From ANON - Louise on January 11, 2004
    I just finished reading all 16 chapters and I loved the story!!! Love that both of them are so tenative and the Hermione is so straight forward in her emotional discussions with Severus. Keep the chapters coming. Excellent work!
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  • From ANON - msmalcontent on January 11, 2004
    I am an avid follower of this story. I agree with other reviews that this is the best attempt at this challenge that i've read. I think the slow approach to getting the two to know each other really works. It's all so well written as well. Thank you for a lovely romantic piece.
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  • From ANON - Droxy on January 11, 2004
    This chapter is so romatic!

    I think I just go turn to mush now.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on January 11, 2004
    That chapter was unbelievably beautiful. You've captured the slow building of their relationship in the most wonderful way.
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  • From GoldenFeather on January 11, 2004
    I'd just like to say a few words about Severus in this fic. I hope that my portrayal of him is coming out believable, because I don't have his POV in this story. Deep down, I don't think he is entirely nasty, the latest chapter comments on this. I don't see him as one who can easily confront his emotions, but he won't run away from them either. As for Hermione, in canon she often sees things a straight forward and logical. She may not have the same demons as Severus, but she has as much difficulty with her emotions. As for what she tells her parents... it is so easy for one little lie to compounselfself like a snowball rolling down a hill. When she didn't tell her parents about small things in her first year, it became all the more difficult for her to confront them later. Sometimes bravery and the desire to share her secrets aren't enough to actually do so. Have no fear... she will have to deal with it eventually. I'm so glad people are reading and enjoying this story. I hope you continue to do so. I love reviews. They really let me see what everyone is tg awg away from each chapter. I would like to state that a couple of these chapters are not entirely what I expected them to be! At one point Draco Malfoy accosted my computer and had his way with it and just last chapter, Harry nearly did the same thing. These characters are hard to keep in line! Thanks again to everyone who reads rev reviews. This story is up over 11000 hits and I'm thrilled.
    Da Feather
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