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Reviews for The Ties that Lead to Trust

By : GoldenFeather
  • From ANON - nesscafe on January 11, 2004
    That was romantic! I love the pace that you are setting for them and the romance that is slowly blooming between them! I can't wait for the next update! Will Hermione ever tell her parents about Severus? She really needs to!
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  • From ANON - shiv5468 on January 11, 2004
    Fabulous. Beautifully understated and all the more sensual for it.
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  • From ANON - buttercup on January 11, 2004
    You make the most innocent things so hot. My monitor will probably blow up when they really get down to it. Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Karen on January 10, 2004
    I'm really enjoying this fic so far. It's well written and has a nicely developing relationship between Hermione and Severus. I like the fact that she's not super orgasmic right from the get-go and that he's not Casanova either. Their unfolding romance is actually quite sweet.


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  • From ANON - Tevkins on January 10, 2004
    This is very very lovely indeed!
    Thank you!
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  • From ANON - LeoGryffin on January 10, 2004
    This is fantastic. I really love it. I can't wait for another update!
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  • From ANON - WizardingAngel on January 10, 2004
    another great chapter and this is going great keep up the great work.........update soon
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  • From buttercup on January 10, 2004
    More! I love this story! It's so sweet the way they are growing into each other. Waiting for Lucius and Draco to make their move.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 10, 2004
    Chapter 15........ I liked this chapter a lot!!! I think it was quite an original idea that you had about the potion that wasn't working... WELL DONE!!! I also like how you had them become closer due to the storm, a very innocent way to allow them extra closeness!!! Til chapter 16, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - bansidh on January 10, 2004
    Lovely. This is still one of my favorite Marriage Law challenge responses. I did enjoy the Potions trick class. Just like something that our Severus would do. Thanks for writing; I'll patiently await more.
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  • From ANON - shiv5468 on January 10, 2004
    I think I like this one the bes of all the forced marriage fics; it has a lovely light touch and a subtle shifting from indifference, to friendship, to something more - probably. That last chapter was quite touching, without being sentimental. More.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on January 10, 2004
    A wonderfully gentle chapter of the two of them getting closer, and learning comfort with each other. : ) I enjoyed it.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 10, 2004
    What a neat twist, thanks.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 05, 2004
    I read chapters 10 - 14 & I really like the way you are writing their relationship!!! I like the fact that Severus is wanting to spend time with her & that you aren't just throwing them together too quickly!!! I think they are the type of people that need to learn each other more before they proceed into a physical relationship!!!
    Glad to see that Draco is out of the way for a bit, but I would guess that he will be worse to her when he returns!!!
    I look forward to seeing what happens next!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ArachneNonafel on January 05, 2004
    As ever....I always feel for our good professor in these stories. Please update soon?
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