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Reviews for The Ties that Lead to Trust

By : GoldenFeather
  • From GoldenFeather on December 31, 2003
    Hello again! I'm pleased to tell everyone that the horrible cold I caught has escaped. Unfortunately it is running rampant through my house. You can't have everything I suppose. The past couple chapters I have tried for authenticity and I hope I achieved it. To me, unmittigated pleasure your first time just doesn't ring right... no matter who you are ;) I'm so pleased and amused to note that your observations hit the nail on the head more often than n Be Be sure to watch how things are said since I like subtlety. I hope I'm planting things well for future chapters, but I'm sure you'll let me know. Thanks for the reviews, I love to get them.
    Da Feather
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  • From ANON - Filodea on December 30, 2003
    This is one of the most realistic stories on this plot I have seen. I enjoyed it, and look forward to reading the rest of the story. The reactions of both Hermione and Severus are believable. Keep up with your writing.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on December 30, 2003
    That was one of the more realistic first times I've read. I not sure why, but I'm a little teary. Thanks.
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  • From buttercup on December 30, 2003
    Love the new chapter! deep sigh I just love romantic smut! Can't wait to read more! Will we see Lucius pitch a hissy in the next chapter?
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  • From ANON - PotionsMistressM on December 22, 2003
    I'm REALLY enjoying this story. I think your Snape is fantastic (and I hesitate to calle Snape anyone's but mine!). Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Tanya on December 22, 2003
    Awe, this chapter was so good! It really showed each of their insecurities, but not overly so! I am looking forward to your next update!
    Tanya~
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  • From ANON - buttercup on December 21, 2003
    This is such a refreshing perspective on the Marriage Law stories. The pacing is great, the characters are believable, and the Lucius angle is just delicious! Great storytelling! I'm really looking forward to reading more. Update soon!

    ~buttercup
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  • From ANON - SandraM on December 21, 2003
    AWWWW! Isn't that sweet?
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on December 21, 2003
    I'm cryigaingain. That was just beautiful. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - RSchneider on December 21, 2003
    Love the story. It is one of the best from the WiKKt Marriagw stw stories. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 21, 2003
    Poor Sevvie......ai like your story very much. I often hold back things I'd like to say for fear of sounding campy and silly. That is why so often my reviews are so short and often dry. Oh make no mistake.....you and other authors inspire me and feed my imagination. I just rarely find a way to tell you without sounding like a total goof ball. Later.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on December 21, 2003
    Ooo! That was wonderful! So sweet and romantic! Gosh that was a great chapter! I may read it again just because it held so much yummy romance! I'm a sucker for a good romance! I love smut don't get me wrong and I hope they get to it eventually, but that last chapter is my favorite so far!
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  • From ANON - Rilla on December 21, 2003
    Chapter nine was just beautiful. I had tears in my eyes when he was trying to explain his inexperience with someone he cares about to Hermione.
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  • From ANON - shiv5468 on December 21, 2003
    I think this story, and particulalry the last couple of chapters, are very well-observed. You can believe in the transation they are making from strangers to acquiantances to friends.

    I am enjoying this immensely.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on December 21, 2003
    A very yummy chapter. : )
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