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Reviews for The Ties that Lead to Trust

By : GoldenFeather
  • From ANON - Kiristeen on December 18, 2003
    Beautifully done. : ) Nice way to weave it all together.


    Kiri
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  • From Karmafreedom on December 17, 2003
    THis is great...more soon please

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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 17, 2003
    Chapter 6........ I am really enjoying the tender side that Severus is showing towards Hermione*
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  • From GoldenFeather on December 17, 2003
    Hello again, sorry I dropped off the face of the planet for a couple days. That's the curse of procrastination and university papers. To comment on my approach for this new chapter and the next couple I would like to give mention to Corazon (Hermione's Revenge) who gave me the initial bug for unsureness on the part of both SS and HG. I feel very strongly that both these characters would have their own insecurities about a physical relationship and will be taking a conservative approach. Never Fear! We will get to good stuff eventually. As unusual a situation as it is, I'm trying to keep everyone reasonably in character without being JK myself. I would also like to tip my hat to Diana Gabaldon's CrossStich (aka Outlander). If you have ever read the book, I'm thinking about the initial part of Jamie and Claire's marriage. I don't want to just toss these two in bed, so sit back and enjoy getting to know the backstory I've come up with for them. And fear not, the good stuff is comming. It has a deadline afterall. Thanks ever so much to everyone who has reviewed thus far. I love the feedback. (BTW I fixed the red/read problem... silly irregular verbs!)

    As Always,
    Da Feather
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on December 15, 2003
    Oh my! what a twist! LOL Those sneaky cruds. : )~

    Can't wait to see more of this story.


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Barrie on December 15, 2003
    I am finding this to be an interesting story. There are a lot of answers to this challenge out there right now and they vary wildly in quality. Yours is better than most so far. I am genuinely intrigued by the characterizations and glad to see that Hermione isn't in hysterics. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

    Friendlyquark
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  • From ANON - Tanya on December 15, 2003
    Haha, I hadn't realized you'd put chapter 5 up when I reviewed last... Anywho! I love Lucius, just the way to get the ball rolling for our lovely pair, Severus and Hermione! Loved the "you see, when a man and a woman..." line Sev Severus... though I can't see him saying that, it was quite amusing anyway! Update soon!
    Tanya~
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  • From ANON - Tanya on December 15, 2003
    Something tells me that the kiss the Ministry official had them do at the close of the ceremony has a major part to play in what Severus and Hermione have to talk about in private... maybe it was another type of binding that they were *obviously* not aware of? Who knows? I won't unless you update, so please do so soon!
    Tanya~
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on December 14, 2003
    HO BOY!!! That does complicate things quite a bit! I am glad that they are trying to make the most of a bad forced situation! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 14, 2003
    Chapter 5........ Damn that Lucius Malfoy!!! He is just one of those characters that you LOVE TO HATE!!! Though in this case his butting in put Hermione & Severus in a position that they have to take action, like they won't enjoy it;-) Can't wait to see how their getting to know each other goes!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Talene on December 14, 2003
    Argh! Too short! Argh!! Sorry....Your story is so very interesting that i am truly eager for more and the waiting is getting to me. Please? More? Soon?
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on December 14, 2003
    WOW! I really enjoyed that chapter! That didn't seem so bad considering! I especially loved the vows they took! Did you make those up? They were really wonderful! I love weddings! Wonder what's to happen next! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 14, 2003
    The ceremony sounds like it was BEAUTIFUL!!! I am so curious as to what was in the letter, can't wait to find out!!!
    Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - shiv5468 on December 14, 2003
    I like this take on the challenge. Reasonable characters, sensible plot development, nice bit of outrage from Hermione. I am looking forward to more soon.
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on December 14, 2003
    Twas was the best idea for a wizarding wedding ceremony that I have ever seen in fanfic! Loved it, loved this chapter! Please update soon....
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