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Reviews for The Ties that Lead to Trust

By : GoldenFeather
  • From ANON - Kiristeen on December 14, 2003
    errrrgg! Love the story. frustrated with the cliffy. LOLOL

    It's simply amazing the number of unique directions to take for this challenge. I really like yours and can't wait to find out what, exactly, that last bit of the mage cge ceremony was -- I imagine that was what Albus and Severus were discussing. : )~


    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Tanya on December 13, 2003
    Well, you're off to a good start. I've read so many responses to this challenge, but I really like the angle you've taken. I like how you've decided to portray Severus, much more mature than in others I've read. Oh, and you've gotta love Albus! Always the meddler! Do update soon!
    Tanya~
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on December 13, 2003
    Thats interesting....I am really enjoying this topic for stories.......yours was an enjoyable read......please update soon.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 12, 2003
    hehe Looks good! I'm looking forward to more though.....Can you do something about how your story appears? It is very hard to read with sentances
    being partial and
    having to go down to the next to to finish. See what I mean?
    Is a pain. Not your fault I am sure but I was hoping you could fix it? Thanks! Looking for updates!
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  • From ANON - GFeather on December 12, 2003
    I know that many authors put comments in the main area of the story, but I find that distracting so I will break with tradition. I'm pleased to hear from you, and I've been toying this story around in my head for a couple weeks now, so if I miss something glaring feel free to yell at me. It's all in my head (like backstory and rules) but I might forget that you aren't in my head. A hint about the direction I plan on taking this story... Never forget that these are both strong, independent and intellegent people. About me: I am a Hermione in many ways. If my writing, (particularly when I get to love scenes) seems familiar, I used to write on the Auelboard. I am currently unbeta'd. Tell me if you find my writing needs it, but I am pretty independent. This is my first published HP fic. I have other G rated ones that I just haven't published yet.
    Da Feather
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 12, 2003
    Chapter 3.... I just LOVE how they think of this in such a simplistic (for lack of a better word) way!!! Neither one of them are really looking at it from the emotional aspect unless they are both forgetting how babies are made;-) Sorry, but I can't see either one of these passionate people jumping in bed, doing the job like they are robots & then walking away without another thought about it!!! They are both very strong, pri peo people, but they aren't dead;-) Just the way they were talking about everything makes me really look forward to seeing how you play this asspect out!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 12, 2003
    You just can't help but LOVE Albus!!! I can't wait to see how Severus responds to all of this!!! Hermione doesn't seem too thrilled, but Draco..... I don't think so!!! Hoping for more soon!!! Til Chapter 3, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Jenny on December 12, 2003
    Interesting approach - you're going to have to come up with some fairly rea reasons for why this is better than the George or Charlie option, but I'm sure you can do it. I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Lady Anne on December 12, 2003
    This is one of the best starts to this challenge that I have seen so far. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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  • From slygriff21 on December 12, 2003
    Great first chapter. I can't wait for you to update again soon. Keep up the great work!

    Tiff
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on December 12, 2003
    Great beginning to the challenge! Am looking forward to your updates - you have a very nice writing style and this chapterveryvery well paced.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 12, 2003
    I have been reading quite a few of the Marriage Law stories & am amazed that , for using the same information, each one has been different from the next. Your's is no exception & I really do like the begining!!! I look forward to seeing where you take it!!! Til Chapter 2, Deb >^..^<
    P.S., Sad about Ron, but nice to see his brothers make an effort to be there for Hermione, nice touch!!!
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  • From lilyadar on December 12, 2003
    Yummy...this fic looks like the beginning of something big! Update soon... and make it good dear... *grin*

    ~l.a.~
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