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Reviews for The Ties that Lead to Trust

By : GoldenFeather
  • From ANON - morgana on July 05, 2004
    some of the best writers claim only when the character controls what you write can you know you wrote correcty what they would do. well done.
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  • From ANON - morgana on July 05, 2004
    some of the best writers claim only when the character controls what you write can you know you wrote correcty what they would do. well done.
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  • From ANON - morgana on July 05, 2004
    some of the best writers claim only when the character controls what you write can you know you wrote correcty what twoulwould do. well done.
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  • From ANON - morgana on July 05, 2004
    some of the best writers claim only when the character controls what you write can you know you wrote correcty what they would do. well done.
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  • From ANON - Rachel Watkins on July 01, 2004
    Hi, I'm reading to chapter six so far. I like the different take on the story...I think you handled the charachters well so far. Also, a question; I noticed the blot type honoring of Ron by the sharing and pouring of a libation, and then you mentioned drinking too much Wassail at a Yule party(I've done that a few times myself, with Wassail or some really kick-ass mead some friends of mine can make). Are you, by chance, Asatru?

    Back to reading the story now. :-)
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . . on June 30, 2004
    Parts 36 & 37, Chapter 35~ Unconditional Love & Chapter 36~ Family Secrets... I think you have done a FABULOUS job of writing Hermione & Severusthesthese 2 chapters!!! Even with all of their strengths, they are still emotional creatures & something like this would take quite a toll!!! They both feel that they should take blame for a situaton that they truly had no control over!!! I do hope that hermione's conversation with her mother along with the comfort & caring that Severus is showing will allow her to do what she must in court & also let her really begin to feel some form of normalcy return to her life again soon!!! Sorry if this shows up more than once, I keep getting error messages or cannot find server notices:( Looking forward to your next update, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . . on June 30, 2004
    Parts 36 & 37, Chapter 35~ Unconditional Love & Chapter 36~ Family Secrets... I think you have done a FABULOUS job of writing Hermione & Severus in these 2 chapters!!! Even with all of their strengths, they are still emotional creatures & something like this would take quite a toll!!! They both feel that they should take blame for a situaton that they truly had no control over!!! I do hope that hermione's conversation with her mother along with the comfort & caring that Severus is showing will allow her to do what she must in court & also let her really begin to feel some form of normalcy return to her life again soon!!! Sorry his his shows up more than once, I keep getting error messages or cannot find server notices:( Looking forward to your next update, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . . on June 30, 2004
    Parts 36 & 37, Chapter 35~ Unconditional Love & Chapter 36~ Family Secrets... I think you have done a FABULOUS job of writing Hermione & Severus in these 2 chapters!!! Even with all of their strengths, they are still emotional creatures & something like this would take quite a toll!!! They both feel that they should take blame for a situaton that they truly had no control over!!! I do hope that hermione's conversation with her mother along with the comfort & caring that Severus is showing will allow her to do what she must in court & also let her really begin to feel some form of normalcy return to her life again soon!!! Looking forward to your next update, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - midnight tiger on June 24, 2004
    ::hugs you tightly:: Oh goodness hun, you pulled these two chapters off wonderfully! and you have me crying again... very realistically done and emotionally strong. i think you did the right thing having Hermione go to the leaving feast and her reactions there were bang on. Her mother's revelation was wonderful as well. sad, but wonderfully writen and i cant wait to see where this takes the story. thanks so much for posting, we've missed you!
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  • From ANON - Jeanette on June 23, 2004
    Would you believe I've been haunting the boards waiting for AFF to come back on line just so I could read this.... I am so glad to see the update and so VERY impressed with how you handled this chapter. As always your writing is beautiful and seemless.

    Love Jeanette
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 20, 2004
    For a minute there I thought the rapist was going to be Hermione's father. The mother didn't press assault charges because? or is that not important? Very unpleasant turn to this story, but well written. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - droxy on June 19, 2004
    great update!!
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  • From ANON - Kate on June 19, 2004
    Whooo, it is completely different to any story i have read!! i love the wou mou made severus into a loving hud! Td! The intimate screens were done amazingly well. The Twist of the rape by malfoy was very good and the emotions that she is going through have been written with precise detail.
    please update soon

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  • From ANON - snapeaddict on June 18, 2004
    Okay, how to put this. This is a lovely story and very sweet and romantic and all that.
    But it's not Snape.
    Snape is a sarcastic sadistic irritable pessimist. In short he's a bastard. That's why we love him
    This would have been a perfect story if it was about Hermione/Lupin.
    That tender caring considerate gentlemanly lover is not Snape.
    Snape would be possessive, demanding, sneaky. And moreover, kinky. He wouldn't wait for Hermione to make up her mind, he'd have
    snuck in a love potion into her morning pumpkin juice, made her love it despite herself, and the taunted her about it.

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  • From ANON - megcoulson on June 17, 2004
    i've been following this story for quite awhile..and i'm so glad you finally updated!....that last chapter was excellent!update soon!
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