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Reviews for The Ties that Lead to Trust

By : GoldenFeather
  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 17, 2004
    I think you're doing just fine, Hermione won't get over being raped in an instant, but I don't think she would dwell on it forever either. The pace you are setting works for me. I glad to see you back. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - Lady Anne on June 17, 2004
    Hello. I just wanted to tell you what a fabulous story I think this is. I don't think you have to justify anything as far as Hermione is concerned. It's your story, so write it the way you want. My opinion, this last chapter was pretty on target, I thought. You've done an excellent job with this story, and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - droxy on June 17, 2004
    I think you did a splendid job on Ties, and you were
    not away from the story that long in terms of updates.
    You just spoil us with frequent updates, that's all.
    ;> Some WIPs I monitor update every 2 months. Don't
    feel bad.

    Since you write so well I can't really concrit you.
    So I can only discuss story and my reaction to it.

    So far you've layed out another mystery as to who it
    is SS knows that was also raped ( was it SS, or
    another girl). He has a lot of guilt and he's not
    telling her everything anymore, he's putting up some
    walls again. Anger and guilt like that will stay for
    a while too? I honesty would have expected this SS to
    go vigilante, since he did not, it seems you are going
    to take him and HG to Malfoy's trial. SS as
    deatheater, while sympathetic to HG would not be so
    easy towards Malfoy and vice versa. I'd expect former
    DEs to be after SS as well. A Malfoy on tiral will be
    in all the papers, poor HG living through it all over
    again would be too much.

    How are HGs parents going to react as well, after this
    happened, and the fact Dad wasn't too pleased about SS
    in the first place. It will be good to get her
    working on the house if for no other reason than to
    distract her.

    The way you handled the leaving feast was very sweet
    and niecely handled with Harry and Ginny (who I just
    love in this fic!), not many folks must have known she
    was married until the scandle broke, but now that
    she's graduated they can get on with life in the open.


    You now are setting up the story so HG has time to
    heal but ives ves you an opportuntiy to rebuild the
    relationship between SS-HG, and that means more
    kissing and romantic tension.

    I do really really enjoy your SS in this mostly sweet
    romance that involves the strugggles of daily living.
    It is incredibly charming in this way. Your SS is so
    different from other MLCs, but he is also plausible
    given your story type.

    Please update soon now that you are back. I can't
    wait to read more! And you have to nail those
    wonderfully evil Malfoys or SS will have to hex you.

    Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - LadyTuesday on June 16, 2004
    Beautifully done as usual ... I can understand your turmoil, as life has kept me from my fan fiction a lot lately, but I found that the delays made my work stronger and I can see it has done the same for yours. Bravo.

    Until the next wonderful chapter,
    ~~ ** Lady Tuesday ** ~~
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 16, 2004
    Great to see an update. Glad RL has let up a little so you are back with us. I felt is chapter was very realistic for Hermione. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 16, 2004
    Great to see an update. Glad RL has let up a little so you are back with us. I felt is chapter was very realistic for Hermione. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on May 24, 2004
    I meant to do this when you 1st posted your author's note, I'm thinking better late than never!!!

    It seems that you have your hands quite full right now & I wish you well with your anatomy course!!! I will be looking forward to your next update, when you have the time!!! GOOD LUCK, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Sally on May 19, 2004
    I just want to let you know how much I've been enjoying this story. Your characterizations are wonderful. I'm sorry that there won't be a new chapter for awhile, but I understand how crazy "real life" can get. Take care of yourself and I'll be looking forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 19, 2004
    This story has most definitely been worth the wait, I hope you don't get to stressed with all your work!
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  • From ANON - droxy on May 19, 2004
    I will wait patiently for your updates to make these two the sweet romance they once were...

    good luck with your classes, school comes first!

    This is one of my fave marrriage law fics mostly because it deals with the domestic parts of life and the developing relationship.

    Still waiting for SS' inner death eater to take it out on Malfoy, and the guilt SS must feel for not being able to protect her.

    Whatever you do, you can't let Malfoy get away with this....and don't doubt your readership either.

    One of my other fave stories only manages to update once a month.




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  • From ANON - buttercup on May 19, 2004
    Take your time G. You're worth the wait. Good luck in your classes. Anatomy is a killer.
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  • From ANON - Aussie Mel on May 09, 2004
    Hey,
    I absolutely love this fic! You are a fantastic writter and i can't wait to see more from you on tis story. I love how you developed the relationship between Hermione and Severus, it was well done and beleiveable. I also like how you made sev have a softer side. hope to see more really soon
    Cya Aussie Mel
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  • From ANON - midnight tiger on April 28, 2004
    oh wow hun, you did a bang-up job on this chapter. the scene in the tub was wonderfully done and you have me crying...again. you seem to have a knack for that. i must say that this is one of the best 'post rape' sceens i have ever read. thanks so much for posting, i really cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 27, 2004
    Chapter 34... WOW is about the best word that I can find to express how I feel after reading this!!! I had to wait a bit to review because this made me cry, good tears!!! This has got to be one of the most sensative chapters I have ever read!!! BRAVO to you!!! I am very much looking forward to seeing what will happen in the next chapter!!! Til chapter 35, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 27, 2004
    Chapter 33... Before I go on to chapter 34 I just wanted to say that I think you did a very nice job writing such a sad & hurtful subject!!! You wrote Hermione with feeling & gave compassion to the people that helped her!!! I do hope that Hermione will be able to open up to Severus & that the Ministry will take care of the undeserved pain she is in becaus of the Adulterous spell!!!

    I do hope that both of the Malfoy's get what they deserve!!! If we are lucky Draco will have his pecker fall off & go to Azkaban as a female!!! Better yet, I hope that Severus gets to them 1st!!! Now on to chapter 34, Deb >^..^
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