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Reviews for The Ties that Lead to Trust

By : GoldenFeather
  • From ANON - Demosthenes on April 27, 2004
    amazing, simply amazing. you have moved me to tears (yes i am a big pansy). very realistic descriptions of post-rape emotions. and this story just makes me love severus even more. cant wait for the next installment!

    -a boohoo-ing fan named Demos
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  • From ANON - Bambu on April 27, 2004
    Severus' washing in tin the tub was one of the most gentle and sensitive things I've read. You beautifully expressed his support and love for her, and her own struggle with allowing him to do so, because sheo neo needed it. It was nice that you didn't force the circumstance nor did you rush it. A truly lovely job.
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  • From ANON - Droxy on April 27, 2004
    Thanks for updating so fast.

    Still expecting SS to explode sometime soon.

    Very sad and angsty.
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  • From ANON - excessivelyperky on April 26, 2004
    Oh, my God, how horrible for Hermione. What a well-written chapter about her pain and distrust, and how Severus is probably bleeding inside for having failed to ect ect her. How well he is re-establishing those ties of trust, as well.

    Sorry. Have to mop my face again. (blows nose)


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  • From ANON - laceyweasley on April 26, 2004
    Wow! You did it again. I was lulled into happily ever-after (almost) and wham. I just hope you have a chapter where Severus reams/tortures/maims the Malfoys. He wasn't a Deatheater for nothing.

    Thank you
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  • From ANON - amethystangel on April 26, 2004
    100 points to Severus for helping her start to trust again
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  • From ANON - Ann on April 26, 2004
    How very lovely and caring that was. I wish that sort of compassion and insight was more available in the real world.
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  • From ANON - IrishRavenX on April 26, 2004
    I almost cried a little there.

    Loving this story, looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Hawklaw on April 26, 2004
    You handled the past two chapters beautifully. In scenes that could easily have gone so very wrong, you kept charcharacters realistic, in character, and wrote with great sensitivity. It was especially nice to see Severus begin to restore Hermione's control over herself by asking permission for every action. Again, wonderfully done.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on April 26, 2004
    Are you writing from experience? Thimes mes across as real and raw, its scarey. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - buttercup on April 26, 2004
    That was a beautiful chapter. Well done.
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  • From ANON - Heather on April 26, 2004
    My heart is breaking. Poor Hermione. Snape's sensitivity and understanding are so endearing in this chapter. Oh, I do hope they both get a chance at revenge.

    Heather
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  • From ANON - Michelle on April 26, 2004
    Oo. I hope that Malfoy gets it!! Poor Sevvy and Hermione. :(
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  • From ANON - Jordy on April 26, 2004
    Well, at least you apologized first! No really, that was so sad, but no apologies are necessary. Except maybe to Hermione. And Snape. I'm REALLY looking forward to seeing the Malfoys get whats coming to them! They will, won't they??? Looking forward to the next update...
    J
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  • From ANON - Droxy on April 26, 2004
    OOH Damn! You should be sorry!!

    Oh no this is not good at all, no no no.

    However , it is good have very evil Malfoys, Malfoys should be evil to the core and they most certainly are here. Black liliies for evil Malfoys.

    We didn't get to see Severus's reaction in full. Is the revenge laden inner death eater going to go vigalante and take it out on our lovely evil Malfoys? I will have to wait (and I hope so becasue the Malfoys can't get away with this behavior).

    However, I hate to see this sweet SS/HG relationship shattered like this (frowns), poor SS loses so much and HG is suffering. It is very clear I am going to have to wait some time for more romantic kissing - and that's not good at all. But I am torn because this story had to turn darker to meet the challenge requirements. Excellent suspense and pacing. Keep up the good work and update soon.


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