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By : SeverelySnaped
  • From jewelcrystal on February 12, 2012
    is it me or is chapter 4: Up the Down Staircase missing? Please fix this, I really want to read on. :)
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 15, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - ladyofthemasque on November 29, 2005
    Very good! More, Please! ~Lotm
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  • From ANON - tiddlywinks on November 28, 2005
    I'm surprised you haven't got more reviews for this, as it really is quite good. I think it could have stood to be a bit longer (but maybe that's just my greedy reader eyes talking). Also you never clarified whether the potion was supposed to target someone in particular or whether it was random? I just assume that it was supposed to target who you love, but then how would Voldemort know to use it on Severus? Just a trailing thought... I hope you write more SS/HG in the future!
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  • From ANON - becca on November 28, 2005
    lovely
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  • From ANON - Zagzagael on March 29, 2005
    Fantastic! That was a thoroughly enjoyable read and I happily, pleasantly, gleefully and even a bit squee-fully spent my morning with your superb Snape character! I thought that this idea was INCREDIBLY original and would have enjoyed even more emphasis on the potion and how/why it worked. You really wrapped up a BIG story in a small package and it was just delightful. Thank you for taking the time to capture this fic and post it for the rest of us! Albus can be so difficult to write and your characterization was perfect. Your dialogue was excellent - both the argumentative but also the more casual back-and-forth words between Snape and everyone else. Fun! And Satisfying!
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  • From ANON - Betz on March 28, 2005
    Oh, that was truly wonderful! A romance with full snarky Severus? How much better could it get. Perhaps an epilogue with some great lemons? This is AFF, afterall. I loved the fact he was full Potions master mode for most of the fic and slow came to realize his feeling for her without going goey-soft. Very nice, I really enjoyed it. (Sigh), God I love a good romance and this was a damn fine one.
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  • From ANON - Ramos on March 27, 2005
    Oh, I'm so glad you finished this! It was so heartbreaking, seeing Hermione trying to control herself, and Snape being such a bastard as if he couldn't help himself. Excellent job!
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  • From ANON - mwk on March 27, 2005
    What a well written, beautiful story.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on March 27, 2005
    Just got to see this story for the first time...LOVED IT! So glad you continued on...it was fabulous! I really enjoyed the forgetful sev trying to cope with his know-it-all student and how things changed - just as it should have! nice ending...more lemons would have been nice but then again I'm just a perv :) Epilogue? Ha-ha!
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  • From ANON - Bambu on March 27, 2005
    I'm so incredibly glad that you finished this. Congratulations. It was an excruciating journey and so beautifully delineated.
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  • From ANON - greer on March 26, 2005

    I just found this fic and it is so good! The characters seemed
    very real, nothing seemed rushed which is nice for a change.
    IMHO you have a good sense of Snape, as anyone can without
    being Rowling. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - TobiasX on March 26, 2005
    Great to finally read more of this brilliant story. Please add the next chapter soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Inapire on March 26, 2005
    I was so hoping you hadn't abandoned this fic. It's great to see an update!
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  • From ANON - jenn on October 20, 2004
    i'll review as well on ff.net, but i had to leave a note here. this story is incredible, as you're well aware, and i adore the verbal sparring between snape and hermione. they remind me of petruchio and kate, and i for one wouldn't mind seeing his tongue in her tail. ;) i'm along for the ride, and i'll keep up on both ff.net and adultff for the plot and hopefully some smut. :)
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