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Reviews for ~Twinkle Star O So Bright~

By : Shawti
  • From RandH4ever on January 05, 2005
    So, where's the rest of the story?

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  • From ANON - robin on December 18, 2003
    I an currently writing my first story also. I find it vary useful if I want to writhe a long chapter to storyboard it. This helps me develop a good ovl pal pattern for the development of the story. I am more of a visual person so this helps me a lot. This explains it pity well.
    __________www.mediaed.org.uk/posted_documents/Storyboarding.html________________
    keep writing it sounds interesting

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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on December 18, 2003
    It's interesting. It also has alot of potential. Update soon and we'll see how it goes!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2003
    constructive criticism- cool, lots of good dark ideas ... Slower!!!! longer chapter, take time to explain things, add more drawn detadetail, build up the plot instead of throwing it out there in a paragraph.

    be sure you have most of your story planned out because *from experience* it's hard to write an entire story pov.

    you also have a few spelling mistakes

    might want to rethink the title

    but very cool i look foreward to the story
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