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Reviews for The Wizards Breath

By : shaolin
  • From ANON - LadyTess on December 29, 2003
    Hey Shaolin,

    I really love your story. I personally think a small amount of any mood altering substance can be a liberating thing. I like the way you let your characters play a little bit with the hash and letting their inhibitions down. Wonderful smut by the way. I hope you continue the story. I'd love to find out what Lucius Malfoy likes to do. Maybe he'll do it with Hermione and Severus! We can only hope. Keep up the wonderful storytelling.

    Tess
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on December 27, 2003
    Oh - yes - please keep going. They both need to be held to their promise to tell . . . us!
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  • From ANON - t on December 27, 2003
    MY GOD!!! This chapter made me wish I was Hermione.
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on December 26, 2003
    As a HUGE Snape/Hermione fan.....off course I want you to go on....maybe tell us what happens when the canabus haze fades....will they still want each other....maybe a happy ending.....much to the shock of ROn and Harry.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 26, 2003
    Chapter 5........ DAMN that was some WONDERFULLY written smut!!! I am hoping that in a future chapter her desk fantasy will be made into reality!!! Looking forward to more!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Dark Derby on December 26, 2003
    I can't think of anything I would be less opposed to than this story continuing.
    I loved this, the only criticism I have would be the moans and noises, like "mmm...", they're a little distracting most of the time.
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  • From ANON - star on December 26, 2003
    keep going holy crap that was great!
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 26, 2003
    Wow! That was awesome! (Truly awesome, not the overused version of the word.)
    Man, now I am all worked up! I loved how she needed to be coaxed into orgasm. That fantasy talk was excellent.
    I feel a little guilty that I am hearing Alan Rickman growling your words. (Ah, the divine sound of it...) Well, not TOO guilty.
    Please write more soon. I hope the next chapter doesn't take you 7 hours.
    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on December 26, 2003
    wow. pretty steamy. and i'm not talking aboue sme smoke from the joint. the sex is off the scale and now you throw in a bit of mystery. why is hermione so inhibited? what happened from her past to make her so closed? can't wait to see how snape gets her to cut loose, even though he's started already. need to see more.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 26, 2003
    This is a great story and I have to ask......this isn't the end, is it? Please......there has to be more!! You did an absolutely fantastic job on it!!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 24, 2003
    Chapter 4....... I just loved it when Hermione said, "don't ever mention Harry or Ron again when I am naked" to Sev, too funny!!! I'm glad that you will be continuing this further, reading a little smut is always nice!!! Looking forward to your next update, Deb >^..^<

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  • From ANON - aprilgrey on December 24, 2003
    Very fine story, thank you very much! Frankly I'm allergic to Mary Jane so I felt sort of queasy reading the story, but still that's not your problem and it was a fine story! So thank you!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on December 24, 2003
    What a wonderful story!! I love it!! Update soon?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 24, 2003
    Tongue
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  • From ANON - CAH on December 24, 2003
    yes, I'm one of the people that's going to say I don't believe for one second that Snape would ever smoke pot - as a Potions Master, he would know the dangers involved. Can you tell I don't use drugs??!! lol I don't think you need that in a storyline for those two...having said all that, I do love the fic, but get away from the pot please!!
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