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Reviews for The Wizards Breath

By : shaolin
  • From ANON - Severessa on September 20, 2005
    Thank goodness you didn't get blown away! I live in Iowa, and understand what it means when those storm warning sirens start to go off. Glad to see you back!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 20, 2005
    I'm sorry, but isn't this the same chapter you updated with a few months ago? Do you have a new one and it just didn't go through the site?
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  • From ANON - pumkin on September 20, 2005
    love it. love it. love it. keep it up. can't wait for more.please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Reader on June 14, 2005
    I really like this fic but I wonder if you're ever going to finish it.
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on April 20, 2005
    Great story! Please continue onward. Any mistakes in grammar or spelling are few and far between. Well done all around story.
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  • From ANON - Mel on April 17, 2005
    I love this one, really! I hope you up-date again soon. I thought it was the coolest twist, especially since I have been to Amsterdam 'coffee shops'! And the Cure t-shirt on Hermione was just the most awesome touch!! Wow!!!
    This is just some interesting, unique stuff!
    Love,
    Melinda
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  • From ANON - missyspikehead on March 05, 2005
    already reviewed a long time ago, but reread the story and thought id review again! i love this story by the way! you ahve got to finish it someday!
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  • From ANON - ariel on December 12, 2004
    yes! snapey stoner smut! i thought i was the only one with strange pot and sex filled snape-fantasies...god, that's such a hot idea. your writing rocks, shaolin! i hope you're planning to add much more to this story. i've gotta draw a picture of severus and hermione with clouds of smoke billowing around their heads and lust in their eyes...sweet. well, keep up the good work, and all the people making bitchy reviews about grammar should piss off. rock on!
    ariel
    ps just curiously, where in indiana do you live? i'm in chicago. damn crazy americans. :)
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  • From ANON - Jibel on December 12, 2004
    damn you do have talent.
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  • From ANON - Severessa on December 11, 2004
    I love this story! Usually I don't go in for the stories that include drug use, just out of principle. This one, however, has a good connection in it making it comfortable to read and enjoy. Another thing that I like is the way you move the characters close emotionally without feeling like "something bad needs to happen now, everything is going along too well". Life is angsty enough as it is.

    I am sorry to hear about your bad weather! Living in Des Moines, IA, I know only too well what dodging tornadoes can do to your nerves! If you don't mind my asking, in what area do you live?

    Keep in touch if you like, four months from now we will be on the front line, weather-wise, once again. Misery loves company...
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  • From ANON - Anna on December 11, 2004
    Wonderful chapter! I absolutely LOVE this story. I'm a big fan of Hermione/Snape pairings. I am really looking forward to reading the next chapter. Please update soon and keep up the great work!!!

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  • From ANON - Lisa on December 10, 2004
    Can't wait for more lemons from you with HG and SS. You do it great!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2004
    So glad to see you continuing this, and not just because it makes me hot! OK... it does make me hot. I did notice a few typos in this recent chapter, not a big deal, you just might want to check this through once more. SO... are they going to stay together through the end of the week? Inquiring minds want to read the next chapter, so please write more!
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  • From ANON - T on January 27, 2004
    OH MY GOD!!!!! Please excuse my typing but my computer screen is all Foggy!!!!! HOLY CRAP!!! talk about a hot chapter! WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!! **kisses feet** this was great! Please continue.
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  • From ANON - MysticSong on November 06, 2004
    Delightfully delicious. Hope to see more - plus funny interaction when Harry and Ron realize just what IS going on. Hah! :)
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