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Reviews for The Wizards Breath

By : shaolin
  • From ANON - Anon on August 18, 2004
    Quite an interesting turn of events,, but I will say that I'm thoroughly enjoying this fic immensely. Poor Ron, guess he'll never know Hermione the way Severus does, oh well...
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  • From fadingprincess on July 24, 2004
    I know everyone has already said it, but don't listen to people who justjust trying to be hurtful. If someone has a legitimate criticism and are honestly trying to help you become a better writer, I'm sure you know to at least listen.

    But there are those who have nothing better to do than say hateful things with the intent of hurting you. And you never have to listen to them. Hagrid told Hermione not to think on it, and you shouldn't either. :D

    As for the whole SS/HG thing, I think it is a totally legitimate pairing. In canon, I defintely hope for Hermione and Ron to get together, as well as Ginny and Harry, so they can be one big happy family. But I read/write fanfiction so that I can read things the author wouldn't write. You're story is a classiamplample. Obviously J.K. Rowling isn't about to write about Hermione in a hash bar, or Snape in a hash bar, let alone the two of them together. But I want to read about what would happen. And if I don't like the way you write it, I can write about it myself (I actually love the way you write about, but I'm just making a point). That's the beauty of fanfiction. And as for Snape and Hermione getting together...why is it so ridiculous? Their age difference is really the only problem I see, and people overcome that everyday. Real people. And these are fictional characters, I don't think it's a huge strech. I mean, Snape and Hermione are both very smart. Brilliant, but scary? I think it applies to both. And there are many stories I've read, including yours, that gives a legitimate reason for them to be together, and their relationship works.

    At any rate, this story is adorable. I've laughed out loud a few times, and it's definitly hot in a lot of places. Sorry this is so long, but I love this story, and it annoys me to no end that someone would be so cruel in their ignorance. Keep writing, I can't wait for a new chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kathleen on July 21, 2004
    Okay, I clicked on the spot where 'next chapter' should have been about five times before I realized that was all I was getting. Damn you. More. I love it, some of the lines are so creative! The only thing that reallllllllllllllly bugged me was the word Cum. It's actully spelled Come, the same way, the Cum is slang.... -Twitch- But I can live with it since ya know, your stories sooooooo good. Never mind a personal twitch of mine. Sorry I noramally don't do anything to do with english, since I normally don't care, but...cum..is...never mind. I loved it and I can't wait for more, do you have a website or something to let us all know when you up date?
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  • From ANON - AriadneElda on July 17, 2004
    Just read it. Snape seems a bit out of character like you said yourself (I think), but who cares when the story's so great? I loved it! Your sex scenes are utterly amazing, so hot and sensual! (Hmm, maybe it's the pot, lol.) One thing though, by the way the last chapter was finished I'm not sure if that was the end of the story. It gave me the impression there's more to follow, although I see you haven't updated for some time. I read several of the reviews and I just want you to know that I, too, am one of the people who support you. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Dizzywitch on June 05, 2004
    YEY!!! Totally great and very funny. I love the stoned snape. i always knew there was something funny going on in that dungeon and now i know why Professor Sprout is always in a good mood. Harry and Ron running around in amsterdam those boys are going to get into trouble!! Is dominatrix Hermione going to rear her head, if she does it would suit her once a control freak always a control freak. I have a feeling she would take to it like a duck to water. Bring on the snape tied to a wall and begging (sorry my fantasy just reared it's head. Down boy!!) Keep it coming.

    Thanx Dizzywitch XXX
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  • From ANON - jkrazed on June 02, 2004
    I can't believe that this chapter has been waiting on me for so long, and I never saw the update! Loved it, by the way. I especially liked the ending. No, teach me, Professor Snape!
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  • From ANON - missyspikehead on May 05, 2004
    Finally!! ive been reading this fic for months now!! bout time you gave us another chapter lol jk i understand the whol block thing. i write too, but not fanfic. i hate my blocks. you know a good trick for getting rid of it? go to a bar or restaurant with some friends and jsut relax totally one hundred percent. hell get drunk laugh and have fun. dont think about anything but that night and what your doing. forget about the story for a while and in a few days ideas come rushing in. always works for me anyways. well keep it up. i like your style its really good.
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  • From ANON - Sd on April 28, 2004
    This is an awesome story. I found it while I was working on a research paper and I can honestly say that I didn't get every much done on it since I read it all in one sitting. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on April 26, 2004
    Yipee an update. Love this story. They are perfect together. And you make it one hot romance. Hope the muse is hot and heavy for more.
    Sorry to hear about the storms. I grew up in Nebraska, so I know of what you speak. Not fun.
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  • From ANON - ehu on April 23, 2004
    *bounces* WHEEEE! you updated! i'm so glad you did! i'm sorry about your tree and your house...*sniffles* i live in hawaii so i can't say i understand, but i understand tragedy/fear/adrenaline/annoyance well enough...so i'll rack it up to something like that. i'll wait for your next update! ciao!

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  • From ANON - Heather on April 23, 2004
    I just spent the afternoon rereading this. I am enchanted by it, intrigued...and HOOKED!! Thank you for updating amidst all the chaos there. I hope you and your family are well! Nice to have you back.

    Heather
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  • From ANON - Annie on April 22, 2004
    Just wanted you to know that this is one of my top 5 favorite stories. You ROCK! Thanks for coming back to us!
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  • From ANON - cofaym on April 22, 2004
    happy to hear you survived the bad weather! I actually MISS the thunderstorms of the mid-west *sigh*. Kansas had fun weather but there is just sun and light rain where I live now - very boring really. I'm thrilled to see your story back and happy that your muse is working again! Watch for green skies!!!
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  • From ANON - shaz on April 22, 2004
    yay! finally updated, thanx heaps,i 2 i 2 hear bout the tornadthatthat must b strange although im from a place where that stuf dont happen (south africa) anyway pls update again soon
    hugs shaz
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  • From ANON - Adriana on April 22, 2004
    I'm happy to see this back, I was wondering what had happened. Glad to hear that the writer's block is gone. I look forward to reading more, I really like this story.
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