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Reviews for The Wizards Breath

By : shaolin
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 22, 2004
    I am so glad to hear that you are safe!!!

    Chapter 12...Later that same day

    Another FABULOUS chapter!!! I am still hoping that one of them will grow a set & tell the other how they really feel!!! Looking forward to MORE!!! Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^<

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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on April 22, 2004
    What a great chapter. I'm so glad you are updating regularly. I hope your creative juices keep flowing because the story is progressing nicely. I really can't wait for them to give in to their feelings for one another and feel comfortable enough to tell each other how the do feel. I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on April 22, 2004
    I am a little proud of myself for not e-mailing you about updates. I left you alone with your muse.

    Thanks for writing this. How I have missed this fic. Are they going to have fun in his classroom and labs soon? (yummy)

    Cheers!

    PS Their first time together and his coaxing is still one of (if not) the best lemons I have ever read. And I read ALOT!
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on April 22, 2004
    well it's good to know you're still among the land of the typing. and wa waa way to return. that was a hot chapter. i liked how hermione scratched snape. that was rather hot. and her crawling across the floor like that. i knew a girl in highschool who did that. my loas tas that sexy. um, i guess that's not relevent. sorry. but of course i have a few nit picks. spelling. sure most things were correct but i did find a few words that were missed in any proofing that was done. hardly any though, but still enough to catch. also, i have to mention the spacing. there were a few breaks which i thought denoted new paragraphs, but weren't. instead the paragraph just continued on its way after the break. it was distracting. at least it's easy to fix. otherwise a great chapter. hold onto your muse.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 21, 2004
    It's after 3pm on the 21st, and no new chapter. I knew there was a reason I deleted this from my favorites.
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  • From ANON - revel_in_me on April 21, 2004
    Sooo pleased to hear your back again.

    :)
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  • From ANON - Spearsister on April 13, 2004
    I'm so glad I decieded to look this story up again reading it ages ago then got distracted but I do love the concept and the story line. great job!!!
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  • From ANON - Lana Manckir on April 11, 2004
    I enjoy reading this fic! The sex moments are great, I just think you're overdong the smoking, but overall a good story.
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  • From ANON - missyspikehead on March 18, 2004
    you cant stop it there! no no no! i want to see hermione tell snape she loves him and then thye have to get married! don't you know the rules??? lol keep writing! its really good!
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on March 10, 2004
    Love this story. Really liked this last chapter. Some house, his anstrial home. Can't wait for more.

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  • From ANON - rubberduck on February 13, 2004
    not fair. not fair at all. i don't like this new set up of subcategories. it made me miss your new chapter. i didn't realize that the stories in the subcategories weren't part of the main listing. no wonder i haven't seen some of the stories i like to read lately. very bummed about that indeed. in this case, for this site, change is bad. lol. anyway, i'm sure you want to hear what i think of your chapter. well, what can i say but another great read. i like how things are progressing. keep it up. you know, i haven't 'heard' from you in awhile. what's up with that?
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  • From ANON - shaz on February 13, 2004
    please please please update soon, this is the best story and i will die if i cant read anymore soon so please dont be responsible for my death:D please
    hugs shaz
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on February 11, 2004
    Aiyahh, this was just what the doctor ordered! Absolutely magnificent! I am definitely going to have to read your other fics. You really are quite a good writer! Such a nice blend of humor, sex, and (the beginninf) rf) romance. I am so looking forward to any updates you do on this fic. I would never have thought of Snape (although the actor who portrays him is something of a hottie,great voice) and Hermione in a hash bar, just too good for words! Please don't stop!
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  • From ANON - jkrazed on February 09, 2004
    Just a quick "Loved it" before I run off. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on February 08, 2004
    I love your story...and I love Hermione falls in love with SNape and they live happily ever after.....I can't wait to see where this one ends up.
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