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Reviews for The Wizards Breath

By : shaolin
  • From ANON - Seva (again) on February 08, 2004
    I've just been reading back through the reviews, and I've come across the whole peggybundy thing...I feel compelled to put my own argument into this, and whilst i realize this is probably not the time, or indeed the place for it, i can't let this go by without commenting. If anyone can think of anywhere more appropriate and perhaps public for my argument to go, please email me, as i feel somewhat guilty to take up Shaolin's space here.

    Although I am certain that i can't bring anything hugely different to the argument than Jkrazed, (or one of the many others who commented) and I wholeheartedly agree with everything so eloquently put by her, here is my contribution, albeit late, to the whole situation.

    Ok, begining with 'On the Set.' It is by no means the kind of thing i would ever want to read/ even entertain the idea of its existance as personally i do find it offensive and generally unpleasant, but neither I, nor Peggy, nor anyone else for that matter have a right to make anyone's life difficult because of it. Whilst i by NO MEANS AT ALL condone or even pretend to understand what makes anyone want to write anything like that, this is FICTION. We have to keep that in mind. AFF.net is supposedly a 'safe haven' for all lifestyles, pairings etc, and if someone is playing out here their bizarre and in my opinion, sickening fantasies, made all the more horrific by the fact that they don't even have the good grace to use fictional characters, then they are well within their rights to do so. Providing such stories are adequetly labeled and give adequete warning, we can all just stay away and avoid them like the plague.

    Secondly, I come to the more pressing issue of Peggy's (and i don't wish to appear...limited in my arguement in some way by using profanities but i really am pissed off about this) fucking appaling comments on the HG/SS pairing. Who the fucking hell is she to prescrible who a FICTIONAL CHARACTER can and cannot have a relationship, or indeed sex with? For fuck's sake. 'The only man fit for her is Ron.' Well, I'm sorry, but within my own writing I'm going to do whatever the hell i please with the characters i use.

    Whether or not Hermione and Ron do eventually get together in the seventh book (which i see as a highly likely situation) is irrelevent to me. I love writing fan fiction. I love writing HG/SS fan fiction because I prefer not to introduce some random outside character, as the vast majority of such characters i see are blatant 'mary sues.' Not that i have a problem with anyone writing in this, it, its just not for me. So, in peggy's opinion i am WRONG AND SICK. Also i am, according to her, a paedophile.

    I think not. Let me be honest with you for a moment. I am a 16 (nearly 17 mind you) year old girl, (gasps of shock and horror eminate, lol) i live in the UK, and so am perfectly entitled to be here, and to write/read whatever the hell I so wish (being over the age of consent and all, and not, in my humble opinion, easily shocked by any means) I've always been one for the older bloke (Alan Rickman is my ideal man, predictably enough) but as i'm fairly distrustful of any of the generally happily married men i tend to be attracted to i don't even consider a relationship with anyone that age. (My oldest boyfriend was 24, but i digress) However, the good old teacher fantasy is one common to me, and being something of a writer my frustrated lustings for the imaginary Forbidden fruit
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  • From ANON - Seva on February 08, 2004
    Why didn't i ever review before?? *bangs head against table in manner of house-elf* why??

    I've been reading this since the beginning and i absolutely adore it, the fact that a really gorgeous love story has developed out of a mad little stoner thing is so completely cool! At first the thought of Severus getting stoned was just too odd...but i soon came round to it, and now i love the idea!

    In short, and because i cant think of a more eloquent way of putting it (brain is too taxed from writing...'Killing Cupid' if you're interested...*blushes* sorry, shameful self publicist!) you rock! *grins hugely!* MORE MORE MORE!

    with much admiration and eagerly awaiting a new chapter,

    ***Seva***
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  • From ANON - caliko on February 08, 2004
    Hmm... mood definatly shifted that chapter.. changed the w fla flavor of the story... **nods** Ok, Champ.. let's see what you have planned.^
    C^
    Caliko
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 08, 2004
    Chapter 11... What a WONDERFUL chapter!!! I really like how you are having them get to know each other!!! I do hope that one of them grows a set & tells the other of their heart's feelings!!!
    Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Eternal Temptress on January 31, 2004
    This is great, i really like the story. i can't wait to read more. its so, well , oh, i can't find the word, but its there. all the best

    Eternal Temptress
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  • From ANON - star on January 30, 2004
    OOOOOOOOOOOO KEEP GOING I'M STILL LOVING IT!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - crissy on January 30, 2004
    severus is so romantic. i want one like him!
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  • From ANON - Aoibheann on January 30, 2004
    This is excellent!
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  • From ANON - caliko on January 30, 2004
    YAY! Can't believe i missed this chappie.. /sigh/ submerge myself for one day in 'hellsing' fics, and i miss my favorite hg/ss up! y! yikes! lol.. keep up the good work, and i'll definatly hang in there till this baby is done!
    Caliko
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  • From ANON - Olka-polka on January 30, 2004
    At last! I began to worry
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 30, 2004
    He took her home! This is getting serious, even if he can't admit to it yet.

    Love the fic. CHEERS!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 30, 2004
    Chapter 10.... I am very much hoping that this is a lead in to a proposal perhaps!!! If they are both feeling that there is MORE to this than the FABULOUS SEX, then maybe they will both come to the realization that they want to be together always (with yet more FABULOUS SEX)!!! Looking forward to chapter 11, D^..^^..^
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  • From ANON - Sherrafina on January 30, 2004
    hmmmmmmmmm..... Sevvie wants some babies!!! This is going GREAT!!!!!!!! MORE MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on January 30, 2004
    oh, oh, oh. you're stock just skyrocketed. led zepellin is the best. hehe. i'm going to have to disect that song now. anyway, that was a good chapter. i'm thinking they're falling in love. scary proposition. especially when you consider it's with snape! well, at least harry made an attempt to check in with hermione. hopefully it will be the start of a reconciliation. can't wait for more. on another business matter, have you gotthe the two emails i sent you about your other story?
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 30, 2004
    Great chapter. What a wonderful twist to have it be the Malfoy home they had been in all that time, very funny. I can't wait to read about their day/days at Evermore.
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