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Reviews for The Wizards Breath

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  • From ANON - jkrazed on January 30, 2004
    Hello! I beleive that this must be an important chapter. I wonder how many times he's taken women somewhere more 'private.' Hummmm.
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  • From ANON - Heather on January 30, 2004
    Love? No, I don't love this fic. I adore it!! No wonder your keyboard was on fire...awesome smut babe. Evermore, huh? So is the Stairway to Heaven inside? What will they find? Will she yes?yes? (If not, can I??????)

    Looking forward to more!
    Heather
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  • From ANON - star on January 27, 2004
    COLD SHOWER ALERT! THAT WAS HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on January 27, 2004
    so hot my glasses fogged up. good job.
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on January 27, 2004
    Aww, poor Severus is a touch insecure. I love the eyes of winter and i did enjoy this one immensly. One question, you mentioned in one chapter about Lucius' cravings, will ther any any more mention of him? Also, you used the term 'channel' alittle much. Try variations of it instead. Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 27, 2004
    Chapter 10 - Is what I like to reto ato as lemon art. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 27, 2004
    Chapter 9...Honesty Is the Best Policy

    This is AWESOME & TOTALY HOT!!! To hear the admissions to each other just added to the heat between them!!! My cheeks are still warm & the words just aren't coming to me;-) Can't wait for MORE!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Hawklaw on January 27, 2004
    That was some of the most incredibly *hot* smut I have ever read! I have enjoyed this story since the beginning -- and I'm hoping for more!
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on January 27, 2004
    Damn that was hot! Please don't finish this story too soon. It is one of my favorites.
    I am still waiting for him to take her home with him to Hogwarts. His desk is waiting for them. (grins) I also can't wait til Harry and Ron find out. That will be good.
    Do your Hermione and Severus realize that they are moving toward permanent couplehood?

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Iphignia on January 27, 2004
    Excellent work, here! And I must commend the Humphries reference in the previous chapter! I adore the way you have written these guys. You have a valuable gift. I don't review very often, but this is very well done and you should know that (though I know I'm not the first to say it). I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Good job writing a number of fics. I only ever completed one and then never motivated myself again. The scene with the two of them in bed, discussing pain, was incredibly strong and moving. I hope you're aware of it.
    Isn't reading fun? It always seems like I'm taking in new experie whe when I read the work of the talented writers who post to the internet. What a fabulous new genre.
    I know I sound high, but I swear I'm not.
    regards, Iphy
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  • From on January 27, 2004
    Very hot! Mmmm...nice smut. (And yes, this review is short because you've left me completely incoherent.)
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  • From ANON - caliko on January 27, 2004
    OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!! LOL YES!! It's a work of art! ^_^ Hehehehehhe.... I just LOVE Sev talking dirty! ***Looking around for hubby... ah HA! Found him... hehehehe...he's gonna be HAPPY tonight!**** Excuse me.. i have to work off some.. um.. tension...
    Caliko
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on January 27, 2004
    Yes a very hot chapter. I think I shorted out my keyboard with my drooling. I just have one comment to make about Severus. Can I have one?
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  • From ANON - jkrazed on January 27, 2004
    Cough, cough. Err... give me a minute. I forgot who to talk...
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  • From ArachneNonafel on January 27, 2004
    I know that I am going to have to turn down the thermostat after that! Phew!!! hehe
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